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Every time I read this thread name, my perverted mind kicks into action and it reads to me "What is your size?" Xp

Lol! Me and my friends each dressed as a character from the Wiggles two years ago for halloween...I was Chef Jeff or w/e...It was fun...Until I slipped in dog poody <x.x> <--Death by Poo!
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Oh yes, and I sang the 'Fruit Salad' song as we trotted down the streets in my high soprano voice. <^.^>

ZOMG!!! YOU AREN'T GONA BE DONE WITH ART TILL FRIDAY!!?? ARRRGGH I HATE YOU!!!!


Hehe, lol, j/k of course! Don't worry, take your time, we can wait. Gratz on the move and have fun!

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Mwahahahahaahahahahaaaa <,<;; Lol <'x'>

<,< you may have done even better to just ask here too <'x'>; I Don't THINK any of us would stear you wrong <¬.¬> <looks at Scarf_Girl suspiciously>

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Eish! Where did you learn all those faces!?!

My fav. face -> _ _l_ _ 0.0 _ _l_ _

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Is that a B52s reference? <o.@>

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Doodlebops

Oh, god...Don't even get started....

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Wow, I am sooooo glad I used Wikipedia to figure out what Yaoi is instead of google...

Soooooo glad.

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Hehe...Me too <'@.@'> Must...advert...eyes...from anime...MUST!!!!!!

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Even though this is a solo thing, am I allowed to post the WIP here first to get feedback?

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It's ultimately up to you if you'd like to post your submission before the deadline. Just not here in this announcement thread please.

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Ok, cool, thanks!

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Nope, that's great. All that's left is to switch out the uncolored ones when they're finished. Who did the second mega? Quake did the first one, right? Did he do both of 'em?

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KianaZero
Scroll down a bit and it will talk about him making his avatar...I PM'ed him if he wanted to practice on BAS and he did so I got me a second mega <^.^>

Heh, nice new signature Scarf!

Ok, this looks like it will be the final version.

I made the images all the same size, both Megas are approx. the same size, and everything runs smoothly.

Any other comments/suggestions?

yah, I saw that with the second mega and I changed that...Just didn't reupload it, then get the link, etc.

The one with just the red bandana is finished, they just colored some to pronounce better different parts (Something like that).

Lol, I dunno' when any of the others are gonna' be done so I am just gonna' leave 'em for now.

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not sure what your looking for but on critiqueside...I would look at resizing all images so they are the same size. helps for the polished look...but to be honest...all depends on what you are going for "look wise"~

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Yah, that is what I just did...I am gonna' change the avatar soon.

Ok, I redid it, and it should be much nicer looking now! ^.^

Ok, the two things you talked about Derek:

1) The unreadable letters is because I used the free trial and didn't wanna' buy it...

2) I use the white slide at the end because if I dont, the images stack on top of each other so then it is like face on top of face, etc.

I can resize the sprites, but thanks!

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Even though this is a solo thing, am I allowed to post the WIP here first to get feedback?

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Just wanna' get an official response.

How does this look?

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Ummm...How do I do that?

As you can see, my current avatar is from the chibi Star drew me. I would like to display all the art I have gotten by taking the heads and putting them into the avatar. How would I make a slideshow thing to display each head, one at a time?

Ex: Chibi BAS head <fade> Accordian BAS head <fade> Derek_Fayte BAS head <fade> Mega BAS <fade> ,etc.

Thanks for the help!

BAS

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The gravel shifted under the feet of three gargantuan thugs, arms thicker then tree trunks and piercing eyes looking through the opening of black ski masks. It was pitch black on the rooftop of The First National

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The bolded parts is a repetition....Maybe you could exchange the first black for dark, or the 'pitch black' for something else...

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air , shaking the windows of the surrounding skyscrapers and sending a cloud of dust high into the air.

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'Nother repetition...maybe something like "A loud blast rang through the silent city" or "...Dust high into the night"

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As he [u]floated[u] down silently

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The word 'Floated' makes it sound like he is just drifting down peacefully as a feather would or a leaf. Maybe a word like 'rocketed' or 'flew'.

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Steel let out a sigh as he looked down at the crooks slumped together then up to the old man and thought, “People just don’t appreciate anything.”

He walked to the roofs edge, turned to the old man, who marveled at Steels great wings, and said, “Phone the police.”


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It may be just me, or your writing style, but the quotes should be on the same line as 'thought' and 'said'. (I think)

Those are the only things I found...Your descriptions for the most part are fantabulous and I love how you said this sentance: [ QUOTE ]
Unbeknownst to the hooligans, Steel Hawk sat perched high above them, watching patiently in his high tech armor, wings drawn, preparing for the perfect moment to strike.

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Are we allowed to make suggestions and such?

Wee! Lookin' good, Far!!! Ty ty ty! <^.^>

You wish...She is already giving moi lessons. Thats cuz Im hot...and cute....and better. lol j/k

Hehe, I love the second phone pic!

Nice, CJ! Lookin' good as always!