_BAS_

Well, now that I think of it, weren't the devs thinking of making a street fighting set? Maybe it'll look semi like boxing...

Wow.. just wow. That was awesome work, Plasma!!! The story was amazing Loved it

*Stabs a Rikti* You ain't takin' LA, @#^%#! They got the best alleys around!!! *Stabs another Rikti*

[ QUOTE ]
Actually, those look pretty cool. And maybe to alleviate the issue of someone starting the game having to wait for more costume options, maybe the devs could tweak it so you can choose the order you recieve costume rewards? Like getting to pick the boxer gear over the anime armor at month 27 and the like. *shrugs* I dunno, just an idea.

[/ QUOTE ]

I like that

Except if he lost his limbs in a poker game, I think a demonic goat girl could take his head pretty easy J/k


Very awesome pic, Sayterra!!! O_O I couldn't do that in an hour, hehe

D34+h k1++y!!!111!
(Death Kitty!!!!!!!)

Same as above here, but welcome back

[ QUOTE ]
Hmm, I wasn't going to post another request until I'd had a chance to do one for someone else... but these are turning out great, and helped a ton on my last (very non-descript one) and turns out I'm rolling up a duo toon with a friend...

The pair will both be Eqyptian themed gods, we're still narrowing down exactly what his power combo is (thinking maybe ice/ice tank, but having trouble finding a suitable Egyptian god for it), but I'm going to be a fire/fire tank named after either Sekhmet, or Bast, Egyptian goddesses of war. Both have cat/lion like features, but as far as I can tell Sekhmet has far fewer/tends to look human more often (I'm by no way a scholar of Egyptian mythology). I've been leaning toward Sekhmet as well, but I think thats more because I'm horrible at designing cat-ish toons. When I think Egyptian, I tend to think white dresses/robes with gold and turquiose jewelry, black hair, etc, was thinking maybe something in that vein. While flipping through google pics though, I found quite a few much more colorful ideas that I liked too, and of course, theres tons of regal-cat-people pics too. I tried to use the Egyptian headdress, but couldn't get it too look right, but if you can work it in, that could be good (fine w/o too).

I dunno what else to say... the two ideas are fairly similar, and both interest me, but I'm having a tough time coming up w/ something I like, probably due to the lack of long dresses and jewelry in the game.

[/ QUOTE ]

Here is my try at it Cat God! Rawr!

[ QUOTE ]
And TA continues to be the RoxXor...

*watches TA wander off into the sunset*

[/ QUOTE ]

I think you're a TA clone, personally You guys both love art so much

OMG, I didn't even realize those were shorts!!!!!!!!!!!11111!111 Zomgjoygasm!!!

Hehe, maybe I will be using some of these pieces after all

Hey you two! Thank you so much for the really helpful critique. I've tried to fix a couple things like the abs, head shape, and the arm. I've also enlarged the (our) right hand as well as the left. I also added a ground line, as Sayterra suggested

Thanks for the tip, Sayterra. On my next drawing, I'll be sure to add the basic shapes before the drawing. I already do the stick figure skeleton, but hopefully this'll help even more

In case anyone was wondering, this is what I used for my reference. I know that they aren't exact, but I tried to get the same feel.

Tel - Unfortunately, I'm afraid of fixing the leg length as I have a tendency to ruin drawings when I fix them too late into the process :3 But I will remember that; I keep getting the same critique, and I try to pay attention to it, but I guess I need to be doing a better job, heh.


Again, thank you all who have critiqued so much, I really, really appreciate all the work you put in to teaching me this stuff; it means a lot to me Wish me luck!

Try emailing support@mmoart.com

I emailed Lush and didn't get an answer before, but Support got it to me

*Picks up thread*
*Puts it back on the tracks*

The boxing stuff is cooling *looking*, but like the samurai stuff, there won't be many times I can use it.

Well, demanding citations do take less time

Here are the details to Prodigy

Any critiques are greatly appreciated. Thanks

Link

[ QUOTE ]
Why not post the request at the City of Artists account?

[/ QUOTE ]

Oh, good idea, Khep. I second that :thumbsup:

Err.. The mod's -may- not want that, BUT, you can always request it on deviantart.com

A lot of us artists have websites there and we can hear your response there w/o any chance of "aggro" from the mods over there, unless it contains copious amounts of profanity and blood, etc.

Wow, man! Great guide, I really learned a lot! Thanks so much for making this; it's an invaluable resource!

Aand, Version 2

Thanks for the help man I'm afraid I'm gonna' mess up uberly if I try that on this drawing, but I'll definitely reference it when I do my next one, which I'll try to make a twisting pose

Thanks a ton for taking the time to help me, it's so very much appreciated

[ QUOTE ]
It's very good BAS, two things... the space from the edge of the last stomach muscle to the bottom of his groin should be half again longer than it is. Also yes the forearm on the full arm should be larger, more rounded from the elbow to the wrist, but keep the wrist slender and tapered in, not straight like a pipe, more like a cone. The back forearm could be a pinch bigger, but doesn\t have to be... Also watch that far bent leg, it's connected to the top of his abdomen being so high, should be lower and not connected to the hip so much but below it and then coming out, kind of like a reverse L. Hope that helps. I didn't redraw it for you, cause I didn't want you to just copy my corrections. Plus I know you're capable of fixing it yourself... keep going! It's coming out great.

LJ

[/ QUOTE ]

Ah, I didn't think of that w/ the leg. I lowered it down more, and I'll scan it in again... I hope i moved it to the right place :3

Thanks so much for the feedback guys

How sweet The fairy one is really really nice

And I really love Blue Note in the first one. Awesome, man!!

Link

This is the pose pose WIP I'm using for Juggertha's art jam. I would appreciate any advice you guys could give me. Much thanks

Yeah, we have no griefers because TA beats them with his stick.

Nemesis Stick that is

Okay, I have these two backgrounds, and FWW said she liked the first one, I just wanna' show this new one and see what people think:

Original (except with the chest facing the correct way, as shown in the update) and Version 2

Which one do you guys like better?