Temps Art Thread

Hey folks, time to start my own thread which will contain pencil sketches, inks, colour pieces and WiPs.

Please feel free to critique anything you see but also guide me along (especially the colour works; looking at you Swanzy

So to kick off I give you the love of my life Sister of Mercy.

http://temperus.deviantart.com/art/S...ered-178536517


Peace.

Interesting stuff.

New forum handle eh?


Sister of Mercy looks sexy, but i still adore the one you made for me the most

Very cool SoM piece... Though I still like the previous one a bit better

And hey! Where'd you disappear to?? Haven't seen you here since that last SoM art if I'm not mistaken????

Been playing other games and chilling mostly, but its damn good to be back

Welcome back, always good to see an artist I have art from not fall off the face of the earth

I really like your drawing of Sister of Mercy. Just one question, did you want her boobiez to look, ummm, flat? That body suit makes them look a tad flat. If that isn't your intention, I think our pro booby drawer, Wassy, may be able to assist. After all, she all about da boobiez.

I thought her breasts looked realistic considering the lack of any obvious support and the positioning of the body suit. I know most folks want them to defy gravity but I like them natural.

I loved her face and hair, and the gun was awesome. To me that was the focus of the piece. The trenchcoat looked like an afterthought but it was a nice touch.

Very cool drawing! I especially like the lips and hair, just enough detail to make them more of a focus than the simple clothing but not enough to offset the rest of the image. You asked for critique and I know I shouldn't be giving it but here it is. I'm a little worried about the reflection effect on the gun. Because it's raised up and in line with her hair you get this weird effect when the two get combined. It makes me feel like her hair is either too glossy because it reflects the same kind of metallic sheen as the gun, or the gun is oddly contoured because it's got all of these different patterns of shadows and light. Just my thoughts, though this does very little to take away from the piece as a whole and I think it looks great.

Welcome back!

As always great doodlage <3

Thanks for the feedback, Its just what I'm looking for.

The "boobies" I didn't shade as I will (hopefully) give the skin area a 3D look when I colour (I'll need help/critique on that) Glad you like the face and eyes, I thought maybe I didn't put enough in but a little goes along way there I guess.

And yeah the gun, waaaay overdone, like a burnt steak, just looking at it makes you go "amateur" I prefer my steak medium, with peppercorn sauce, mmmm steak /drool.