Damn you, Birdy. Both very good pieces, I loved the slight repetition of events in 'Suicide Takes Ages', a very effective story mechanic. I'd have to say it was my favourite out of the pair, though that's by a small margin. Didn't notice any typos or such, but then, I never do :P
They were both great!
Brawling Cactus from a distant planet.
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I'd have to say [Suicide Takes Aged] was my favourite out of the pair, though that's by a small margin.
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And thank you, CB.
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Another story about Gunwitch. Somewhat adult themes, do not read if you're mental age is insufficient.
Disturbia
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THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED!
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Interesting, interesting indeed, you jammy wordsmith.
Okay, the next in the sequence. This one features violence, 'adult themes,' and may cause momentary disturbance of the tear ducts. Sorry.
In accordance with the aforementioned themes, please do not continue if you are not sufficiently adult.
Blood
Oh yeah, it's also pretty long, sorry about that too.
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Not, I think, my best work, but cute.
Lazy Day
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Not, I think, my best work, but cute.
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"Don't go away mad, just go away..." The best line Clint never said.
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And the story continues...
Snakebite
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Very interesting, especially considering you did swing Tina by the statue. The pacing felt a little frantic at one point at the end when I read it, but I think that was more the quickly changing scenes, and not a writing issue as such. And what a way to close the story on.
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Very interesting, especially considering you did swing Tina by the statue. The pacing felt a little frantic at one point at the end when I read it, but I think that was more the quickly changing scenes, and not a writing issue as such. And what a way to close the story on.
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I also wanted to switch from emotional scene to mild comedy at the end, hence tucking Arrow Azure's appearence in there. Tina is likely to make a few more drop ins at the status over the next few months before her untimely 'accident' happens.
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Just for the record, that's as far as the progression will go for now. There may be some stories set in Praetoria to follow, but this last tale starts to push her into the mainstream Unionverse so we'll see how a few things pan out before I go further.
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Well, we're less than a month away from Going Rogue coming out and we've had a bit more info on Praetoria City and its inhabitants. I'm happy to set this one free.
It's set prior to any actual in-game activities, after Windows of the Soul, but does set up some of the planned storyline for Gunny's progress from Praetoria to Paragon City.
Pain and Gain
FYI - link seems to be working again.
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Not a new story, the next one will be out after GR releases.
However, all the Gunwitch stories are available from her character page on Unionverse and may be easier to access.
http://union.virtueverse.com/index.p...nwitch_Stories
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Love and Loss is now up for reading on the Unionverse wiki.
And the PDF version.
Adult themes in places, people, be wary.
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Okay then, the second part of Gunwitch's 'Origin Story.'
Beware of adult themes.
Fear and Death
Or you can read it on Unionverse
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Broken Mirrors the next installment of Gunwitch's story.
Unionverse version for those who don't like PDFs.
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Through the Pain
Louise initiates Project Omega, and discovers just how much of a mess she's in with Alison. Slightly adult themes.
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Two stories I haven't yet linked in to this thread:
The Price of Perfection
Industrial Avenue
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Basically as an exercise in character building, I've been writing fiction based around Nitoichi's Praetorian counterpart, The Gunwitch, coming to Galaxy Girl sometime around August. It's probably a bit early to be publishing this, really, but I'm impatient.
Besides, I'm vaguely hoping Zortel's eyes will light up when she sees the second story...
So, here we go. First up is Windows of the Soul a story set in Praetoria before Gunwitch even becomes Gunwitch.
And second is Suicide Takes Ages, which is set after her arrival in Paragon City, but before she's really met any of the heroes around town. This story does have 'adult themes,' please don't go reading it if you aren't an adult.
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