Dereliction of Duty (Arc ID: 373571) - Dr Aeon's Second Challenge


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I've been meaning to try out this Architect thing since it came out, but somehow have never managed to get around to it. But Dr Aeon's challenge seems like as good a place as any to start. Any feedback, whether related to mechanics or content, would be appreciated.

(Special note: this arc has undergone several title changes, and will possibly go through several more - I hate coming up with titles, so I'll accept suggestions for that as well.)

Dereliction of Duty
Arc ID: 373571
Keywords: Solo Friendly
Morality: Villainous
Level range: 5-10
Warnings: none

You've been contacted by a renowned hero of Paragon City with a proposition. Is it an offer you can't refuse? At least he doesn't want to arrest you yet...


 

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Ooooooooh, this seems very intriguing, a villain helping a hero! I will try to give it a try before the deadline.



Bad Voodoo by @Beyond Reach. Arc ID #373659. Level 20-24. Mr. Bocor has fallen victim to a group of hooded vigilantes who have been plaguing Port Oakes, interfering with illegal operations and pacifying villain's powers. He demands that revenge is taken on these miscreants and his powers are returned! You look like just the villain for the job. Challenging.

 

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It is an intriguing arc. I've sent some feedback in PM.

Good luck in the contest!



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Played and sent you a PM with review. Let me know here if it gets updated or not.

Peace out!


 

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Thanks to all who have played and offered feedback for me so far.

As the deadline is fast approaching, I am still prone to tinkering. A lot has changed since I first publishe, and hopefully I have managed to tighten up the story a little... but may have succeeded only in making things muddier.

If anyone has the time and inclination over the next couple of days, feedback is much appreciated.