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Crestent

By Crestent,
Posted on: 2009-09-13 13:45 in Multi-Media Fan Creations

 

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You're definitely improving. Do you want a redline on this?

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try this [url= < website > ] [ img ] url of image [ /img] [ / u r l]

remove spaces and add actual urls

so it looks like this



but looks good.

 

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Things are basically in the right place and the right size, but you don't have enough anatomical detail to indicate depth. I added a little more space to the right side to indicate the curvature of the face, but other than that I just added more detail to what you already had.

Also forgot to use red lines lol.

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Quote:
Originally Posted by Crestent View Post
Thanks for the feedback FD, I'll add those changes.
Looking at the comparison between yours and FD's tweaks, Its evident your not too far off where you want to be

 

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It's bluish on mine.

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It's VERY blue.


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