Interesting.
The anatomy that is.
It's interesting because there are some defining lines along the hips and torso area. Reminds me of Jojo's Bizarre Adventure and Fist of the North Star. Both manga had a strong emphasis on exaggerated muscular bodies.
My gripe would be with the clothing. They are wearing t-shirts right? Well then the fabric around the neck area shouldn't be "mapped" but have some depth 
All in all, I like the heaviness of the 2 characters. You can feel it by looking at them.
Interesting drawing..
Heh, I knew the clothing would cause problems... Not something I do a lot of to be honest 
But words from a master! I feel humbled and slightly awed...
hey hey^^ Not bad at all, an heavy style original in this forum, good work. You're going to colorize it ?
I actually have nothing to colourise it with... The only coloured things I have are a blue biro, a red biro and a green biro that doesn't work without blobbing ink everywhere. Not the best really...
Got to agree with the above fellas, nice heavy style and good anatomy as well.
It's not running away. It's advancing in reverse!
Ok, so I know that in my Scotbot pic post I said I probably wouldn't post any further artistic attempts. But as with so many things the Scotbot says, the opposite has happened...
For your consideration...
Nova Scotia & Spear
Feedback is very much appreciated. Possibly desired. Thank you...