Maestro Attacks! A Marvellous Movie Production
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Well Mr and I were cleaning out the attic at Marvellous Towers, and we came acrross this old reel of film.
Hope you all enjoy.
Feed Back encouraged.
Maestro Attacks Chapter 1
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NICE very nice can't wait for the next installment if you find it in the attic there...
(PS. wish there was a DE attack in Atlas.. liven the place up a bit)
omg that is swish coolies
more!! ....gimmeh more1!!11!
Very very awesome! I love the feek from the piano music and the black and white video.
Mr Marvellous "Rocks". Love the whole silent era thing...
Indeed, a very nicely done movie Two thumbs up from the Cap.
two thumbs up indeedy!
Loved it! Just loved it!
Only comment: Some of the text bits took too long in mu humble opinion. But that's just me..
I give it a 4.9 out of 5. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Wow very cool, did not really like how the cape was during the fight... did not look right, I've no idea if that happens with claws at all & loved how you gave the beast the right name!
Thanks for the kind comments guys.
I wasnt sure what reaction it would get with it being diffrent to the norm.
The 2nd chapter is at the story board stage at the moment but shouldnt be too far away.
Raz:- You should be carful what you wish for the DE may just well land in Atlas Park.
Gun Nut:- The capes like that with claws it just goes every where lol.
Thanks again guys and keep ann eye out for
Maestro Attacks!!!!!! Chapter II
Mu hahahahah!!!!!!! Mu hahahahahah!!!!
Sorry about that got carried away!
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Well Mr and I were cleaning out the attic at Marvellous Towers, and we came acrross this old reel of film.
Hope you all enjoy.
Feed Back encouraged.
Maestro Attacks Chapter 1
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Great, love the kitsch silent feel to it and the piano. Great atmospherics...
Good guest spot by "Bille Piper" too
Thelonious Monk
Nicely done, but my typo sense (tm) kicked in at a couple of points....
1 minute 44 seconds in, it should be somebody, not sombody.
3 minutes 22 seconds in, shouldn't it be "You end is nigh, Marvellous!!!!!" with the comma? Otherwise it comes across as a bit camp and pervy
And at 3 minutes 56 seconds, surely it should be starring, not staring, and appearance, not apperance
OK, so I'm a pedant, but typos just leap out at me
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3 minutes 22 seconds in, shouldn't it be "You end is nigh, Marvellous!!!!!" with the comma? Otherwise it comes across as a bit camp and pervy
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And of course, as is traditional in posts about typos, there it is... Should of course have been "Your end is nigh, Marvellous!!!!!" <sigh>
Still a good movie though, regardless of how nitpicky I get
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I like the old fashioned black and white thing but maestro really need a tophat and a twirly moustache.
Well Mr and I were cleaning out the attic at Marvellous Towers, and we came acrross this old reel of film.
Hope you all enjoy.
Feed Back encouraged.
Maestro Attacks Chapter 1