Let's do some proofreading

Here's a fun game! See if you can find the problem in the text in this screenshot, particularly in the middlish, badgish region of the picture.

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Issue 16 made me feel like this.
Warning: This poster likes to play Devil's Advocate.

A couple commas and a "the"?

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The one that jumps out is "grant you discount". It should be "grant you a discount", or, better yet, "each grant you a discount".

Edit: Clearer grammar, still!

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"I wish my life was a non-stop Hollywood movie show,
A fantasy world of celluloid villains and heroes."

Oh, no, not text errors. I'm sure there have never been any noticed in the history of the game.

So /bug it and move on.

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[ QUOTE ]
Oh, no, not text errors. I'm sure there have never been any noticed in the history of the game.

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And here people thought it was the AE that was destroying the foundation of our game. Hardly!

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Never surrender! Never give up!
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Well, as lightly as some others are taking it, I find text errors in the game quite irritating. I usually play solo, and actually read all the text of the storyline. I also like reading what my badges say when I get them. If I find an error I /bug it, if I find another I /bug it, and then if I'm playing and find another text error I /bug it. You get the picture.

I'm not giving up on /bugging them, maybe one day I'll notice less of them. If I had to take English at school, then someone else is going to suffer for it!

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