That's a very cool idea for a contest. Nice!
Alright... its my day off and I'm not doing diddly squat until more of my friends hop on in-game so why not... I'll give it a whirl. 
I just finished the arc, and I must say, there was not enough room for the review I wanted to give. However I shall remain silent other than this is a well thought out arc.
I must say the second mission is my personal favorite! 
Enough room? Hm. Maybe I should've clarified. The review should be posted on the thread itself. In-game, just quick comment saying you played and rated it would suffice, and would direct me to the thread to read your suggestions/critiques there.
Play an arc, give good constructive feedback, and get a free sketch?
Im in! I'll play your arc 
What's the time limit on this? I'm in an all-work-no-play mode to finish up a piece right now. But I'm doing this because I have.... ZOMG VACATION next week and will have a chance to check it out at that point.
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What's the time limit on this? I'm in an all-work-no-play mode to finish up a piece right now. But I'm doing this because I have.... ZOMG VACATION next week and will have a chance to check it out at that point.
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Working on finishing up a particular piece, eh? EH?!
Is this where I giggle enthusiastically and hope its the piece I think it is?
Yes. Yes it is.
Its the only piece left I had from commissions that got in before I closed for July. Wassy needs some Wassy Time ^.^
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Yes. Yes it is.
Its the only piece left I had from commissions that got in before I closed for July. Wassy needs some Wassy Time ^.^
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Wassy time sounds like fun time.
Well I hope you enjoy your vacation! (so jealous!)
*woops, moved my review to other thread*
Thanks everyone! The contest/sweepstakes will run through the 31st. After that, I'll randomly select the winners and get those sketches done ASAP.
Through the 31st, huh? Well now, that's a pretty good while, should get you lots of plays. Dang, I wish I could draw. Then maybe I could get my arcs some. 
"If I had Force powers, vacuum or not my cape/clothes/hair would always be blowing in the Dramatic Wind." - Tenzhi
Characters
Well i put my review in
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Through the 31st, huh? Well now, that's a pretty good while, should get you lots of plays. Dang, I wish I could draw. Then maybe I could get my arcs some.
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Yeah, I might try to get more than three sketches done, depending on the volume of responses. I originally had a rough estimate of 1 free sketch per 10 plays. No promises on that though, as artists schedules can be notoriously fickle. I know some folks may not like the "bribery" behind getting more plays, but with the current way the AE system works, the arc would get buried and well, I like the idea of having something i wrote earning a "dev's choice" badge.
Hey people. Get to playing and reviewing my arc. =P If it falls off the front page of the AE forums again i'm going to shut down the contest early.
I'll jump in there as soon as it's back up from maintenance been meaning to run it for a while.
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Hey people. Get to playing and reviewing my arc. =P If it falls off the front page of the AE forums again i'm going to shut down the contest early.
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But i already did
Tell your friends to play too then!
Wargh! I pencilled it in for tomorrow, I'll have you know. I'm a very busy and important woman.
Ok Banyai, my hubby and I ran your arc together, so you get double feedback now.
EnnVee feedback:
I have to say this arc is well written, the storyline is very complex and much thought went into this arc. I found the custom characters to have a unique style with nicely designed outfits. Overall I would rate this a 5 star arc even though I found it to have a rather short ending to it. I feel that this can be extended in on, and should!
I ran this arc on my ill/therm troller and must say I LOL'd when I read this [NPC] Fortunata Chapman: Your parlor tricks are no match for my psychic abilities!
Barron_ :
I thought it was a well written arc, the content and story line to the whole thing was quite entertaining. I did also like the roots from which the story came from, I personally think that this is where one-of-a-kind arcs are best made from, not some silly made up world, but something that can actually be formed around actual fact. Good job I say, but just one thing.... "No, my walkie talkie"?
[NPC] Kapitan Remalante: No! My walkie talkie!
GJ! 5 stars
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Wargh! I pencilled it in for tomorrow, I'll have you know. I'm a very busy and important woman.
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Well excuuuuse me your highness-ness.
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I thought it was a well written arc, the content and story line to the whole thing was quite entertaining. I did also like the roots from which the story came from, I personally think that this is where one-of-a-kind arcs are best made from, not some silly made up world, but something that can actually be formed around actual fact. Good job I say, but just one thing.... "No, my walkie talkie"?
[NPC] Kapitan Remalante: No! My walkie talkie!
GJ! 5 stars
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Found a suitable Tagalog replacement. My "dictionary" is currently away on vacation. >.>
See? Got it done. Your arc got some of my EXTREEEEEMELY valuable time. You should be honored and ecstatic!
Put my review in the other thread ^.^
Hey art collectors. I'd like to drum up a little more interest in my arc and gather some more feedback. Basically, 2-3 lucky folks who play through my arc and provide constructive feedback will receive a sketch of a character of their choice. If you're interested, more details can be found at this thread...
Bayani's Storyarc (Feedback)