I'm back! (and I bring art)


Brangzo

 

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Hey! Anyone remember me?

*cough*

Anyway, I have a picture a recently did Link.

Now, I must ask you for comments, criticisms and suggestions!
I know some people can't handle that stuff but I can, so let loose! Can't improve otherwise


 

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Zikar, you never left...


 

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Nice!

The right (his right) shoulder pad appears to be in front of the chest piece, when, I think, the chest piece should be in front of that shoulder.

lines are nice and show 3d curving. Are you planning on adding any shading? That woudl help the 3d illusion a lot.


 

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Nice! You might just want to add more folds to the cape. And as mentioned above, are you considering doing some shading?


 

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Zikar, you never left...

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Well, these forums anyway

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Nice!

The right (his right) shoulder pad appears to be in front of the chest piece, when, I think, the chest piece should be in front of that shoulder.

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Yeah, I see what you mean there.

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lines are nice and show 3d curving. Are you planning on adding any shading? That woudl help the 3d illusion a lot.

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Nice! You might just want to add more folds to the cape. And as mentioned above, are you considering doing some shading?

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I'm not considering more shading at the moment, but that's mainly because I suck at it and need to develope it a bit more.

Thanks for the comments all!


 

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I like the cartoon look of it and the boldness of the red. The eyes look like they are a pale light gray and I am a sucker for gray eyes.

I am still amazed by the talent in this community. I never would have noticed the bottom part of the legs were short and the cape needs more folds. I would have just figured he had short legs and no wind heh. There's a reason why stick figures are about as close to being an artist as I will ever get *sigh*.

PS
By stick figures, I mean real stick figures (my avatar) not those crazy amazing stick figures that are in the other thread disguised as "stick figures".


 

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I am still amazed by the talent in this community.

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I agree.....this community is overflowing with talent. This community has even inspired me into getting back into it.

As for your art Z, I think its a great piece. Im not going to critique your art but I will just say that practice makes perfect. Keep up the good work.


 

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That's so much guys

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The eyes look like they are a pale light gray and I am a sucker for gray eyes.

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His eyes are actually a result of powers and he doesn't actually have any pupils, just sort of a grey circle where his iris and pupil would be