Operation: Mayhem! (Story)


American_Valor

 

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Corsage,

Awesome job.. absolutely awesome. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!


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Glad to know the God of Thunder digs my work. Thank you, Thor, for your praise.

New work is coming soon. Look for the first installment of Sharkhead Surprise April 11th!


 

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Smiles, nice work Looking foward to it even more. /em claps...

AV


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Excellent work Corsage.. keep it coming.


 

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Pretty well written, not my favorite - feels a little too brutal for my tastes considering Paragon City's usual silveryness when it comes to random bystanders.


 

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While writing this story I was afraid that it wasn't dark enough. Considering it was about eight super powered criminals with varying degrees of malice, I felt evil needed to served in spades.

My overall goal with Operation: Mayhem! was to introduce some interesting and likeable characters that the readers would find themselves rooting for, then turn spin them in the other direction once they got down to business.

In the case of Voidstrider, I think I both failed and succeeded. The casual brutality of the leads got to him, which was the plan. However, that also seemed to turn him off. Part 2 has good guys in the lead roles, so hopefully you'll give that one a shot too, Void.

As always, I appreciate all of you guys taking the time to read my little tale. More to come!


 

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It needs more cowbell.


 

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I cant wait to see what you've done with my character Corsage...


 

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It needs more cowbell.

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Damn, I knew I forgot something. And not even a tremor on the Bwerp-O-Meter. Oh, well. You can't win 'em all.