The first 2 pages of my comic completed

Here are the first 2 pages that Wolfgangraven sent me. I still need to add the words and colors. anyway enjoy

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http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y5/...0final20-1.jpg

Wow, very nice!

Very cool!

Stunning visuals..love the shading. Great scene.

Yeah He did a great job.

Super work! But what are they doing to the girl?? o.O

Ok I'll explain it The Warlord destroys the village where she is from to capture the girl which has the gift of prophecy As they take the girl She has one final vision In this vision she talks about Gideon's coming 1000 years in the future and that the warlord would fall to him. The girl then dies from the shock of having that final vision. The warlord doesn't know it yet but he is supposed to die and become immortal that is why he live so long and Gideon defeats him. I will post the story of the immortals so you guys cane get a better understanding.

Here is something that expains Gideon's existance as well as the other immortals in my story.

The awakening is the transition from mortal to immortal. It can happen in a few ways. Most cases it is by death and holy or unholy ressurection. In other cases it can be done through magic with out the person dying. For Millenia there has been a struggle between good and evil. Two factions of immortals had arisen. The Saviors and The Corruptors. The Saviors were created as God's warriors on earth while The Corruptors are Satan's pawns. The oldest of the immortals are the brothers Cain and Seth, The children of Adam. Both brothers have long since disappeared off the face of the earth. It is said that Cain was the first Vampire. Contrary to popular Belief He was the first corruptor with the ability to suck out a person's life force. He suffered from none of the weaknesses vampires do. He could walk in the sun and was immune to their weaknesses. He was also the first immortal to bear children. This is where the story of the vampires begin. He had 3 sons Abishag, Abital, and Achan. They grew up to the age of 21. That is when they stopped aging. Like their father they had become immortal but unlike him they began to thirst for blood and succumed to the weaknesses of most vampires. they could no longer walk in the sun. their immortality was like a disease that would spread. They began to feed on mortal men and infecting them, making them vampires like them. It is said that the Chosen will also have the abilty to bare children. It is said that the chosen would be awakened in our darkest times. Then will the tide turn between the forces of good and evil. This time is now.

That's some awesome art, dude!

Great work! The art is fantastic and that is a good story to boot!

thanks

I can't wait to gewt the rest and publish the comic