Story is good 
everything else I'm not qualified to critique.
More story!
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[color=red]Official Beer Wench of PWNZ[/color] Arc 452196 When Madness Reigns over Reason. Play it and PM me your constructive criticism on what I can tweak before Oct 20th. <3 U all
Yeah, pg 2 is where I plan to have some whitty banter, and then the guns come out.
Guns!
*squeeee*
*happyhappyhappy*
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[color=red]Official Beer Wench of PWNZ[/color] Arc 452196 When Madness Reigns over Reason. Play it and PM me your constructive criticism on what I can tweak before Oct 20th. <3 U all
Juggy, what happened to Juggertha's comic 
I liked that one a lot and wanted moar.
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Juggy, what happened to Juggertha's comic
I liked that one a lot and wanted moar.
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Wow, you mean you actually remember it? I'm impressed.
I actually plan to revisit it soon. I've been working on my backgrounds a bit, and hope that'll bump Juggy's panels up a notch (like historic backgrounds for each era).
Wow, dunno how I missed the original rework. That got +fav PDQ!
I like this Juggy, really neat. 
This is gold dude, keep up the great work... roll with your inspirations!
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Juggy, what happened to Juggertha's comic
I liked that one a lot and wanted moar.
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Wow, you mean you actually remember it? I'm impressed.
I actually plan to revisit it soon. I've been working on my backgrounds a bit, and hope that'll bump Juggy's panels up a notch (like historic backgrounds for each era).
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The question is, who called him? BAH! Well either the Goat... or Smersh... judging by the strength of that BAH!
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This is gold dude, keep up the great work... roll with your inspirations!
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Correction! This is the gold dude. And Juggy's work makes the gold dude smile. 
It's damn good, dangit. Talent with the drawerings and now storytellingitis? I'm going to envy you now.
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LJ is right--this is gold! Great Idea and excellent execution.
I concur with those above, especially Ironik.
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Juggertha, I really must say again, that you and Jomaro are the two artists that I think of first. Whenever I think about who I would want to immortalize Bruthaman. That is the highest praise that I can give.
As for Iron America... Oh would that you had been put in charge of orchestrating the new look of the returning Cap in the mag. I understand that they are harkening back to bygone days, so that there will be room for evolution. But I believe that as it is currently constituted, that particular title is not long for this earth. If they had perhaps gone in the direction you have, well then... ah but it's all moot. Iron America looks.. in the vernacular of the young 'waaay kewl dude!'
Keep up the great work. And please keep sharing it with us. I for one feel priviledged.
Well, anyway, that's my two cents.
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My smile is just skin deep
If you could see inside, I'm really crying
You might join me for a weep
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Thanks all. And Bruthaman, you've got a cool lookin' character.
Wow nice work juggs. looking forward to the next page
Yeah, I've got it planned out... but no guarantees it'll actually get done any time soon.
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You need to teach that baby how to use the can opener, to free up some time. What is he, like 6 months old now? Kid needs to learn to fend for hisself!
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verytight Jugg...very tight indeed...
...not looking to change anything a witt, but be kinda a cool effect if the shield where two halves that could interconnect to form the whole round shield to protect against those really large inbound attacks when he brought his forearms on top of one another....well...I think it would. heh~
...the sword is truth...
~whiteperegrine~
I kind of thought of something like that... OR, that they project a force shield or something.
A few months back I did a piece for a Captain America redesign challenge. I thought it'd be cool if Stark straped on the old bucket head for abit of irony.
The piece has taken on a life of its own and beocme the most popular one in my gallery (shoot, just look at those faves?!?!)
So, I've been meaning to do more panel work and I thought it'd be cool if I revisted that theme.
Here's page 1 of IRON AMERICA. /tumpets sound
If you have any changes you'd like to see, voice them. But keep in mind, the poses are set and all I can do at this point is tweak a couple of things.
So, what do you all think?