What can be done to improve it?


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I really like this costume that I came up with for my Archery/EM Blaster Maiden of Archery.

But I feel it lack something. I cant put my finger on what it is, but hopefully one of you can.

So please give it a shot and help me at improveing it.

Thanks Poul
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Hmmm.....That is a awesome costume....

The only suggestion I can think of at the moment would be add an orange(orange gold?) and white chest detail (like one of the Symbols), although I don't know how well it would fit what you wanted

Hope this gives you a few ideas!


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I think you might want to change the gray on the belt to gold. It looks odd since there no grey anywhere else.


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I think there's a disconnect between how much of her legs are padded, and how bare her upper arms are. I always hated that about that particular costume set, since it doesn't really flow well between top and bottom.

My suggestion is to try and increase the coverage on her arms. Easiest way to do that is to grab the Longbow style padded shoulder armor instead of the small pad you have currently. If you could only pick separate arm patterns this wouldn't be an issue. >:x


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Change the belt color to one of the yellow/gold colors you're using. Maybe the shoulder pads too. Blue is dominating the color balance a little too much.


 

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Changing the color of the belt details to gold will only serve to divide the outfit in half more than it already is. It seems better to keep the main trunk looking like a uniform piece and the other brighter colors towards the extremities. That's part of why the outfit looks nice in the first place, as it radiates colors outwards.


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It's the character that is important, not the outfit. A contrasting belt will help show off her butt!


 

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I´ll toy a little with the ideas so far. Thanks for them.

If anyone else has ideas please share them.
Screens of what you mean is allso very welcome


 

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Stealth belt and chest piece.

That is all.


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