The Games Gods Play - by Juteboxhero! (story)
By
Gata_,
Posted on: 2007-08-08 03:42 in Multi-Media Fan Creations
Where is the story?
I can't find anything without a linky =o.o=
OH MY GOD I AM SUCH AN IDIOT!!!
37 views and no one caught on to that! SHEESH! 
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/61590807/
There's the link to the story! I'm so sorry I am dum!! Teaches me to make posts at 5:30 in the morning!! :P
*hands rowrsie some catnip*
It's okay, I've seen the pic before so I got over the *ooh pretty* to actually read the post, and I was like =>.<= did I miss something?
It's all good now =^.^=
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OH MY GOD I AM SUCH AN IDIOT!!!
37 views and no one caught on to that! SHEESH!
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we did ... just figured you were beeing your crazy self again 
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okay I read it and I added my comments on DA. It was actually my first DA post. I hope you find my comments helpful.
Dun worry we still love ya Rowr... well, most of us
I like the story. I especially like the fact that you don't have a hero and villian on every corner blasting each other. Great for the game, not so much for a story. My only comment and I really don't have any reccomendations on how to fix it but it seems a bit fragmented. I don't know if it's too much extraneous info, not enough info, the grammar or the paragraphs are too small and don't develop, but iit seem a bit choppy to me and did'nt really get into a groove.
I hope she does finish the story because we can't leave a bunch of weak willed males hanging....
When I read Loki, for some reason I though of Heavy Metal. "Give it back, it's my Loknar...."
Hi gang! Just wanted to point some well-deserved attention at Jutey's writings! She posted a great alt story that was based on this pic by Brandon McKinney, one of our 'alternates series' pictures!
So enjoy! It's a little longish but it's a good read. Leave some feedback if you like as well! 
I did some of the editing on it so maybe I'm a little biased, but it's a GREAT story so far, with some light innuendo