Sythias WIP , Need help

Here is what I have so far.
I've circled what I think needs to be fixed and added arrows as to the diredtion I think certain parts need to be pushed out or pulled in.

Anyone else see something that I'm missing?

Yes, there are a couple things. First of all, it's not a metal full-face helmet that's colored brown, and the character isn't named Ironik. Other than that, I guess it's okay.

I'd sharpen the cheekbones and chin, giving the face a more elongated and sinister look.

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Here is what I have so far.
I've circled what I think needs to be fixed and added arrows as to the diredtion I think certain parts need to be pushed out or pulled in.

Anyone else see something that I'm missing?

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You know this makes me remember a tip someone gave me years ago that I follow to this day. To get a different perspective on your work, invert the image. This used to mean that I would carry my sketchbook to a mirror and look at the image but with PS now you can just flip it digitally and see how it looks.

Some more progress.

Added the suit, bowtie, goatee and mustache which brought more things need to fix.

I fixed what I saw from before and made the chin and cheek bones sharper.

Looking good so far. A few additional pointers on this crazy lookin' fella:

He could stand to have a bit more cheek and jaw bone. As it stands, he looks like a crazed rat (which is not a bad thing, but a little more jawbone and chin would make him a bit more of a psychotic human vermin then just vermin )

Also, his ears could stand to be pushed further back on his head and coming out from the side. They are a bit too close to his cheeks and are a bit too flat as they stand.

Other then those two things, you have a great piece here so far... love those teeth XD. Totally psychotic!

Good I have a terrible time with ear placement and was thinking that they are too far ahead.

I'll have the revised version up in a second.

I like the cheek and jaw bone fixes alot.
Not sure I got the ears right though.

All inked up

freaky lil dude...well done on that look alone~

Thanks so much man, I love it every little creepy, sinsiter bit of it! Great job!