Hehe, lol! The only critique I have, and I don't know how to better explain this (And I can't do this myself) the whole piece has a lot of character but I think you could make Chiney's expression more joyous, seeing as she is a little kid's character, who just saved the best holiday ever! Just me 2 cents
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I think you're right, BAS. Since she's wearing all pink, and she's made by a little girl, I would suggest she look a little more joyous, hyper, excited, etc... I would make her eyes a bit more open, her mouth a bit more upturned, and perhaps make her feminine features a bit smaller to show that she is a bit younger. At the moment she looks of an adult. Great piece though. 
I think its cute Rowr <^o^>! I can't wait to see the finished version!
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well i think the character itself may be an adult i need to clear that up with PMD.... but probably not a child or young teen. maybe an older teenager and year i'm definitely gonna work on the expressions and such once I get going more.
I remember it being a teen, I think it was an older teen though... Still I would make her look a bit younger. But that's-a'me. 
Looks much further along than when you showed me
Very nice Rowrsie.
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looking good rowr, your work is paying off in spades. 
critiquewise: the only thing that jumps out at me is her hair. kinda plastic looking versus natural. as it stands has a very old school "doll" look to her...but could be just me.~
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Wow! Rowr ever since you have started posting your artwork here you have constantly gotten better. Those art classes are really helping! This one looks great!
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Okay so who remembers that big art trade thread? I thought I'd post this there but since it's a WIP for now I'd make a new thread.
This is for PMD's daughter, of her character Chiney. Early work in progress.
Chiney saves Christmas!
(yes that will be a Hellion getting a giant santa hat pulled over him)
And yes, CRITIQUES ARE WELCOME!!!