Also I would appreciate feed back of any kind.
Except kinds that cruelly hurt my feelings. Only nicely hurt my feelings please.
Thanks.
- SL
Awww, we try not to hurt feelings at all here!!! 
I like it! You ink cleanly and have oodles of detail!!! *nod* I'm interested to see how it would look colored.
If you're looking for any models my dark/rad triple eyed defender Radey Ayte is available!!!
I like the liberties you took with the weapons, great mood addative, and the fingers are great, all in all looking really good.
TY all, sincerely, for your comments and compliments.
Star, he's a quick pencil of Radey... lemme know if you'd like me to go ahead with it or keep playin' around.
http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?i...vablastyx7.jpg
Also, for the edification and enjoyment of all viewers... my first attempt at paintshopping an image. This is my tanker, Serengeti Lord, versus his nemesis (my brute), Terralith.
http://img113.imageshack.us/my.php?i...rawing1on8.jpg
Comments, critiques, criticisms welcome. I'll do any requests that I can, but while I'm a fast penciler, I'm a sloooow inker, and an even sloooooooower colorizer, so patience will be a virtue.
Plus I'm still learning in all three areas... really pretty new to this whole drawing thing... I mean, other than recreationally.
Well, there it is.
- SL
Feel Free to play with any of teh characters that are in my sig.
Really like the weapons and pose youve got going for your scrapper.
The last image is great nice colours, great muscle definition.
Liking it alot.
As has been said, you include a lot of detail and do a good job inking. And for your first attempt at color, your image of your Tanker and Brute is very well done.
Something that struck me as looking odd in your Exosteel piece: his legs look twisted from the knees down, especially the left one (knee twisted left, shin seems to twist sharply to the right about halfway down).
And in case either of my characters spark inspiration:
Heaven's Agent
Brimstone Dragon
That's your FIRST attempt at digital coloring???? Color me impressed!!! (It's my second favorite color! 
) That looks GREAT!! I really love the shadowing on Serengheti's chest.
And that pose looks awesome for Radey!! You might
want to round out the boobies and shift them diagonally upwards a tad bit The hands are great!!! *boggles* Thank you so much!!!
Is Serengheti a Lion man? If he's on Virtue he needs to run around with Pep's Tiger space pirate and my Catboy swashbuckler!!!
if you want another model you can use my tank, Millennium Man.
here
Sorry, no screenies but it's my art of him.
My AR/NRG machinegunner build
Hehe, Serengeti is indeed a Lion man, but sadly, he roams the relatively cat-less expanses of the Freedom server. I mean, I'm sure I've seen other cat-themed toons, but I don't think I've ever met any of them.
Anyway, I think I'd like to do one of the DonnchadH's and Heaven's Agent as well as take a stab at Millennium Man. I'm movin' to Chicago tomorrow, and I was playin' around with my artwork before I packed it all, and decided to post some things. 
Thanks for all the comments and stuff. Hopefully I'll be on in a day or two with some updates.
Star, started the inking, and though, as stated, I'm a slowpoke, I think it's goin' pretty well. I'll see if I can't post the ealry results of my labor later on!
- SL
oofta...for first time looks pretty durn good. always welcome to practice with whiteperegrine...although if ya favor cats I can get ya screenies of Lynx too (my only cat) ~
...the sword is truth...
~whiteperegrine~
Nice work man ever draw a speedster
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Thanks white, speedy! I'll certainly give both of your characters a try! And wp, while I do love me some caped crusaders, I have a special spot in my heart for cat-folk.
Anyway, Star, here is the preliminary edge-ink of RadeyAyte. Enjoy!
http://img81.imageshack.us/my.php?im...sbinkedwa4.jpg
I tried to take care of your recommendations, but I am unfamiliar with drawing the female body... sigh... anyway, hope you like!
okie dokie...I'll send some screenies of Lynx and run down on him. ~
...the sword is truth...
~whiteperegrine~
Loving your style man keep it up and thanks for adding me
My final post before I pack away the pencils and the computer.
DonnchadH "Out for a Stroll"
http://img100.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dcofasmn5.jpg
Heaven's Agent "Gauntletless"
http://img241.imageshack.us/my.php?image=haglqv7.jpg
Both in penciling stage. Hope you enjoy! Please, if you have any comments or requests, let me know!
- SL
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My final post before I pack away the pencils and the computer.
DonnchadH "Out for a Stroll"
http://img100.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dcofasmn5.jpg
Heaven's Agent "Gauntletless"
http://img241.imageshack.us/my.php?image=haglqv7.jpg
Both in penciling stage. Hope you enjoy! Please, if you have any comments or requests, let me know!
- SL
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Those are really very good I love the Heavens Agent action shot!! well done indeed!!
If ya wanna give TA a shot your always more then welcome too, or AoT. Screenies below:
Screenies of TA
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Assasin Of Thor Screenies.
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That looks great, love the axe. Just one thing, he actually has just skin tight clothes underneath, no tie.
But thats just a small matter, its looking good otherwise, cant wait to see the inking stage.
If you got a chance, how about
Cpt. Alpha ?
Ooo, Ahhh...Very nice drawings!!!
Feel free to draw Back Alley Scrapper if ya' want!!! Once again, great job so far, keep it up!!!
FYI, he has green and brown camo pants but they are hard to see in the screenie.
Scarf_Girl�s Official Kid Brother!
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Hehe, Serengeti is indeed a Lion man, but sadly, he roams the relatively cat-less expanses of the Freedom server. I mean, I'm sure I've seen other cat-themed toons, but I don't think I've ever met any of them.
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Oooh a cat boy 
If you'd like, feel free to practice on Rowr
Who is a Tiger, of course of course, not a Lion.
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Also I would appreciate feed back of any kind.
Except kinds that cruelly hurt my feelings. Only nicely hurt my feelings please.
Thanks.
- SL
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Hum, okay... *gives Serengeti a box of cream filled chocolate doughnuts* You art sux... *gives him a hand full of freshly baked cookies and a glass of milk* and it looks like it was drawn by a blind epileptic five year old... *sits him down in a most comfy chair and turns the t.v. to his most favorite program *... so, did I hurt your feeling's in a nice enough way? huh? *hands him another cookie*
Seriously, you have some right nice stuff here, and that was a bang up computer coloring job for it being your first time! On your first piece that you showed, that hammer was just dead awesome!
And on your recent drawings, you got a GREAT pose and some really nice work done thus far on Heavens Agent. However, on DonnchadH, I did notice that his right shoulder (the one with the ax slung over it) is a touch too wide. Well, maybe not the shoulder it's self, but the arm is sticking a bit too far out from the body. It doesn't look like it really connects to his chest under that jacket. Maybe angling the line for the chest out a touch more in the direction of that arm would fix it... or just angling the arm a touch more in to the chest while leaving a slight "puff" at the top to show the shoulder-pad of the jacket might work. It's still a great piece and I love that ax and his hand holding it!
I would have given some more critiques, but for being really slow, you are amazingly fast... and I guess it don't help the piece out too much to point out things like that after it's inked XD
Slow my [censored]...
Awwww, Radey looks cute!!! Very cat-like!! And I think you fixed the boobs pretty well (You think guys looked at 'em enough.... ).
AAAAART!!!!! *huggles drawing*
[color=#cc99cc]Nice stuff so far! If you want to practice more with females...look below. All these guys need more girls.
So I did this drawing of my MA/invul scrapper, who only has MA because there's no suitable "Street Fighter/Brawling" set in the game (ahem, ahem devs... for the umptillionth time). The whole concept behind him is that the dude is just invulnerable through story-heavy lab accident, and can't fight for [censored], cuz he's a scientist. Thusly, in the drawing, he has a big energy generating warhammer and a tiny, punch-packing plasma pistol... which in my head he would use to, y'know, make up for not being able to fight. So here it is...
In pencils...
http://img81.imageshack.us/my.php?image=esugyg5.jpg
Inked....
http://img145.imageshack.us/my.php?i...uginkedhs6.jpg
Coming soon: Colorized! (If only I can satisfactorily figure out my damn paint shop...)
- SL
PS I'm a forum noob so if the links don't work, please lemme know how to fix 'em.