not bad so far arc , Tho im looking forward to seeing more 
took you long enough to start posting
Pose is nice, ofcourse we'll need more detail but I'm sure you're working hard at that.
He he, nice pose. Very...bubbly 
Can't wait to see where this goes!!! 
Thanks Arc!!
On hold till tomorrow. Day three of anything I eat ends up trying to kill me. And as for "bubbly", sorta the technique I use to try and get proportions down
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Update #2
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OOo look! Limbs!!! 
This is looking good!! Don't chicken out at the last minute and scrap THIS one too or I'll have to get out the poking stick of DOOOOOOM
Gonna stick with this one. I like the pose a lot better than the other two.
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Hey, looking pretty good there! Love the feet !
One point that could be improved upon would be the shoulders and head. You need to raise her head and neck up a bit... but not her arm position so that there is more of a slope in her shoulders... and so that she has a little more room in her chest for her lungs. You might also want to lengthen her neck just a smidgen as well.
As is, she has exceptionally manly shoulders, and I know that Kail's dating her because she's twice the man he'll ever be, but she still is a girl :P
Still, great work and grate knees too!
Thanks Graver. I don't draw females a lot so I have a tendency to give them male attributes. I will take your critiques into consideration and work on them tomorrow. Of course Radey is a "criminal" and locked up so maybe she works out in "the yard" a lot. Star is gonna kill me for that one. More Critiques!
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thinkin graver hit em on the nail at this point, but given it is still early in development lots ta do. for the beginnin stages looks fine to me although I would probably trim that foot down a smidge as your making adjustments...
on side note this is actually a cool little idea. posting the various developmental stages of a piece of work. helps illustrate the steps people go through and when to make adjustments. This way, one doesnt have to start from scratch or do a major make over... 2 thumbs up on this thread for that reason alone, imo ~
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So close yet so very far away
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Faster dammit!!
*grabs whip*
Don't worry Star!! I got this!
lol looking great man keep it up!
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Heyyy that's looking REALLY good!!! Her feet look great and I really like the knees. Might wanna lower her bewbs a little, they're still pretty high and shoulder-y
Can't wait to see it finished, I really like the look. *snatches the whip from TA* Get crackin' boy!!!
Yeah..I meant to lower those today but by time I wrapped up my drawing time I didn't realize it until I scanned it. Get those tomorrow hopefully. Gotta get ready for the week long work fest 
. *wonders if he can call in and say his back hurts from being whipped by Star...*
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lol
glad I could help!
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Whip seems to have worked, a little.
Things changed-Right boot design altered, boobs altered, laces on left boot, rad/dark powers, scarf in progress, face...I think that's about it. Can't believe how close these pencils are from being done.
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Neatarino!!
Still need to lower them boobies a liiiiittle bit more and maybe move that right one over towards her side a bit.
Is that a flaming ball of death she's holding? >
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Neatarino!!
Still need to lower them boobies a liiiiittle bit more and maybe move that right one over towards her side a bit.
Is that a flaming ball of death she's holding? >
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Its Radeys own fault for wearing that push up bra of doom and padding her outfit a bit much :P
*looks at the boobs and cries, not something he does when looking at boobs* I need to alter that Miasma in her left hand though. Was going for something shadowy but it did come out too flame like. Gonna work on this when I get off work this week but the updates will be far and few between.
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Sooooo close
Ooookay. Since my leg has been healin up, only have pain in my ankle now, I have been able to do a little more work on this. After looking at it one thing that is bugging me now is the right boot but will work on that possibly tomorrow after I get off work. For now I sleep while you guys critique.
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He he! Is that a little skull on her belt? XD I Love it!
It's looking good so far! Might want to put another line in there to give her a crotch right now it's just smooth and the legs don't go straight into the hips on real peoples.
Give her a crotch! Give her a crotch! Give her a crotch! Give her a crotch! Give her a crotch! Give her a crotch!
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Give her a crotch! Give her a crotch! Give her a crotch! Give her a crotch! Give her a crotch! Give her a crotch!
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Errr. While I might not have said it the way Foo did, I agree with his assessment. You have where the left leg joins the body drawn like / when it should probably look more like Y
Hopefully my little ASCII drawing tip makes sense.
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I seriously can't stop laughing now... omg it hurts so much with the laughter!!!
Very rough draft of something that has taken three attempts but I think I like this pose a lot better than the other two. Star said I should start posting my work here so what the hell... Radey
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