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*pokes Star* Another Radey WIP

Arcaine

By Arcaine,
Posted on: 2006-09-04 13:50 in Multi-Media Fan Creations

 

Posted

Very rough draft of something that has taken three attempts but I think I like this pose a lot better than the other two. Star said I should start posting my work here so what the hell... Radey

Arcaine, Penumbra-Edge, Penumbra Edge, Paragons Scrap, Umbral Assassin, Repulse Shock, Clopin, Dynamo Charge, Storm Jammer, Deceptive Fallout
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Teen Squadron ftw
Arc's a Deviant!

 

Posted

not bad so far arc , Tho im looking forward to seeing more
took you long enough to start posting

 

Posted

Pose is nice, ofcourse we'll need more detail but I'm sure you're working hard at that.

 

Posted

He he, nice pose. Very...bubbly

Can't wait to see where this goes!!! Thanks Arc!!

 

Posted

On hold till tomorrow. Day three of anything I eat ends up trying to kill me. And as for "bubbly", sorta the technique I use to try and get proportions down

Arcaine, Penumbra-Edge, Penumbra Edge, Paragons Scrap, Umbral Assassin, Repulse Shock, Clopin, Dynamo Charge, Storm Jammer, Deceptive Fallout
@Arcaine/@ArcaineDos
Teen Squadron ftw
Arc's a Deviant!

 

Posted

OOo look! Limbs!!!

This is looking good!! Don't chicken out at the last minute and scrap THIS one too or I'll have to get out the poking stick of DOOOOOOM

 

Posted

Gonna stick with this one. I like the pose a lot better than the other two.

Arcaine, Penumbra-Edge, Penumbra Edge, Paragons Scrap, Umbral Assassin, Repulse Shock, Clopin, Dynamo Charge, Storm Jammer, Deceptive Fallout
@Arcaine/@ArcaineDos
Teen Squadron ftw
Arc's a Deviant!

 

Posted

Hey, looking pretty good there! Love the feet !

One point that could be improved upon would be the shoulders and head. You need to raise her head and neck up a bit... but not her arm position so that there is more of a slope in her shoulders... and so that she has a little more room in her chest for her lungs. You might also want to lengthen her neck just a smidgen as well.

As is, she has exceptionally manly shoulders, and I know that Kail's dating her because she's twice the man he'll ever be, but she still is a girl :P

Still, great work and grate knees too!

 

Posted

Thanks Graver. I don't draw females a lot so I have a tendency to give them male attributes. I will take your critiques into consideration and work on them tomorrow. Of course Radey is a "criminal" and locked up so maybe she works out in "the yard" a lot. Star is gonna kill me for that one. More Critiques!

Arcaine, Penumbra-Edge, Penumbra Edge, Paragons Scrap, Umbral Assassin, Repulse Shock, Clopin, Dynamo Charge, Storm Jammer, Deceptive Fallout
@Arcaine/@ArcaineDos
Teen Squadron ftw
Arc's a Deviant!

 

Posted

thinkin graver hit em on the nail at this point, but given it is still early in development lots ta do. for the beginnin stages looks fine to me although I would probably trim that foot down a smidge as your making adjustments...

on side note this is actually a cool little idea. posting the various developmental stages of a piece of work. helps illustrate the steps people go through and when to make adjustments. This way, one doesnt have to start from scratch or do a major make over... 2 thumbs up on this thread for that reason alone, imo ~

...the sword is truth...

~whiteperegrine~

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