Gorgona's Story Kinda Dark, work in progress

Sharp, biting pain. Screams in the dark, heavy breath and powerful hands pawing at my bruised body. The Trolls were not kind with their female prisoners.
They started giving us the ‘dyne so we wouldn’t “break” like the other females had. The time lost all meaning as my body was violated over and over. I retreated into the depths of my own mind to mask my pain; I made lists of the names I heard. Grendel, Atta, Ogre, Caliban, and many others, I heard the names bellowed in the dark and inscribed the names into my mind. They will have their reckoning, in this life, or the next.
Sleep came between the pain and drugs. I awoke, hearing a different kind of scream, a bellow of pain from one of my captors. Shouts of warning and warcries followed, and the sound of weapons fire, and blades cleaving green skin.
A sharp beam of light pierced the blackness of the cavern. I could not see the source just that they were not using the torches that the Trolls fancied.
“Here’s one of the prisoners!” Shouted an unfamilure voice.
“Quick, break her bonds and give her a port patch!” shouted another new voice.
Heroes. I had heard that their ranks were filling back up after the devistation of the Ritcki war. That they would come down to these caves after us spoke volumes, the city was being made safe again. I passed out and felt the comfort of the Medical Transport Beam take me from hell.
“Hmm, no identification? No registration on the records? Odd. How are the blood tests coming? Yes? Yes? Well that’s unfortunate. How about the genetic tests? Really? Ok. “
Voices in the dark, talking about a dead person.

CockAroach, I if you've ever read my fanfic, you'd know that my writing is much darker than most of the Posters in this Forum.

However, you have touched the one subject that even I refuse to go near. I applaud your bravery, but I hope that if you're going to involve such EXTREME subject material, you're doing so in an attempt to convey a much deeper message.

Are we supposed to believe that women captured by trolls are treated just like men? Beaten, robbed, left for dead? I think she's done a very tasteful job of handling what is a very ugly but inevitable and believable aspect of Paragon City life. Not graphic or vulgar, but painful and harsh.

I think it's good. Yes it touches an uncomfortable topic, but not in a distasteful way.

It utilizes the confusion of the character, and puts that onto the reader. So yes, we all have a good idea of what the Trolls have done, but it was done in a way that we don't have to be told what those acts are. Because of that, I don't believe it needs to convey a deeper message other than the realities of injustice that can happen upon innocent people.

Just my 2 influence.

All I have to say is.... When is the next chapter coming? So many good fanfics here, this one has really caught my attention.

I would have to say GREAT work. Very dark. Very Exciting. Only wish it was longer .

Sorry havn't had time to write more about Gorgona.

Gotta admit, hadn't checked on this in about 5 months and was just looking over my old posts, gotta say, thanks for the feedback!

Unfortunatly Gorgana has left for greener pastures, I will keep writting more, but this was kind of a bit too dark for me, was taking me to uncomfortable places and didnt' like what I was seeing.

Hopefuly more will be coming soon.

I find nothing shocking here, it is expected of bad guys to act like bad guys. From a male point of view, none of us would dare write that such things could or would happen to a male toon, and most of us stay away from the [censored] issue altogether.

But, villains are what they are, and it is the unwritten rule that thye would act as such. Given the span of human history, we don't need to look far behind to find exemples of the victors taking many liberties with the conquered. It is a fact of human nature that these things will happen.

It's all good, a bit on the short side.

Hope you write more!