The_Spartan

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  1. Atlas Park! It's a smorgasbord of stupidity!
  2. Flesh the idea out a little more. DO they have a primary objective? A uniform? a unit NAME? Who do they work for?

    Details.
  3. I think this needs a little more flesh.
  4. The_Spartan

    Reloaded

    Somewhere in Kings Row, a man sits at a dirty bar. Long black hair hides his face, but the several empty shot glasses around his bloody knuckles tell his night's story. Another person sinks on the barstool next to him and turns to face him. His words spilled from his mouth in smooth curls of menthol scented smoke while one hand lifted one of the many empty shot glasses.

    "So...this is it then?"

    For a moment, nothing more was said. The man sitting at the bar slowly breathed in and sat up to remove the hair from his eyes. "Yeah..." he said. His voice grinding like worn gears.

    "Vance...You've been here for the past four weeks, every night, drinkin' yourself blind."

    That's right. This man was Quinton Vance. A man's man. A soldier's soldier. At least, he was. Right now, he was a train wreck on two legs. He turned and rested his scarred and bloody elbow in a mess of broken glass upon the bar. "You been watchin' me?" He asked. A coy smile spread across his lips. He was trying to feign okay.

    "Yeah...I have. And you're ****** up. Look man, I know you're tore up about your kid, but there ain't a damn thing you can do to fix that..."

    Vance sighed deeply and found himself jolted into the deepest recesses of his mind. Even after plowing through a sea of alcohol and fist fights, he found he could not drown the memory. He couldn't drown the images. How he watched that pick-up truck plow into her car. How he broke the windshield with his bare hands and tried desperately to pull a still smoldering engine from his daughter's lap; how he watched her take her last before fire fighters could arrive. There wasn't enough vodka in the world to drown that...

    "She woulda' been sixteen..." Vance, while nodding and looking this stranger in the eye. He then turned his gaze toward the multitude of shot glasses and blinked. He wanted to cry. he wanted to sob his ******* soul out right there on that bar...but he couldn't. It had been trained out of him, torn out of his soul by years of living in the proverbial hell that was a warzone.

    "Cricket woulda' been....sixteen, man...today...Ya know...it'd be okay, if I had someone to hate for this. If I had someone to blame...someone to ******' KILL!...But...I don't, man...it was an accident...So what do I do, man?...What do I do?"

    The stranger said nothing for a moment. He could look Vance in the eye and see that his soul had been ripped right out of him. He was a hull. Scarred, battered and emotionally shattered. He sighed and put an arm around Vance. "C'mon bro...let's get you outta here...."


    Hours later, Vance woke up. But he was not at home. He woke up at a table. Several men in uniform were there. Vance smacked once then licked his lips before wincing at the bright light in the room. "Damn...." he said, obviously wrestling with the hangover from hell. "Where am I?"

    "You're at Vanguard Headquarters, Mr. Vance..." a familiar voice said. Vance held the sides of his head and murmured. "Why...the hell am I here, Mama Grey?" he asked.

    "Because we want to help you...You can't continue to drown yourself in alcohol and self loathing...Representatives from The Pentagon wanted us to find you..."

    A man in what appeared to be a green uniform sat down in front of Vance and leaned forward. "Son, you look like hell on two legs..." he said as he removed his green beret and put it on the table.

    "Listen to me, son. I know what it's like to bury a child...it ain't easy. I know yer ex-wife says it's yer fault. I know that the person responsible was just a kid that wasn't payin' attention. There's no one to bleed for it and I know that's what's killin' ya tha' most. But, you gotta keep livin'. You gotta try to get past it. Now, there's talks about reactivatin' yer old unit, but in the meantime, I got some work for you to do..."

    "What kind of work, General?" Vance asked, tilting his head. The General could see the shift in his gaze. Nothing piques a lion's interest like the scent of blood...

    "The kind you do best...suit up."

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r_ck97ZkSIg

    [This is actually the VERY first CoH video I done. I just kept it under wraps. I used Cyberlink Power Director to create it. I'm incredibly novice at video editing, but I'm a big boy and can take the harshest of criticism. More than anything, i just want to get better at them.]
  5. The_Spartan

    Dear [RP Virtue]

    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Rick Astley View Post
    For you, anything you want
    Oh, Mr. Astley! Sign my Cross Colours hoodie! (yes, I own one. lol)
  6. The_Spartan

    Dear [RP Virtue]

    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Rick Astley View Post
    No u

    ...does that count as Rickrolling me?
  7. Oooooooh Caaaanaaadaaaaaa, Ma-ple Syrup and snow and stuuuuuff!

    Good job, Canada!
  8. I dunno.


    But this is an opportune time to shamelessly plug my video!

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SAnTz02rllE
  9. *walks in and stands under the Atlas-Tron with mic in hand*

    ....

    *raises an eyebrow at the site of several rabid wolverines*


    "DAMN!"

    *walks out*
  10. They'd steal it and run on freedom. No, just kidding.

    Welcome to Virtue. We may be full of whiners, drama queens and self important jackasses, but thieves are few and far between.

    And some of us even give away free stuff. Yay stuff, right?
  11. Quote:
    Originally Posted by Valentyna View Post
    Hee! I think I like this interpretation better than my own! Not everyone might necessarily feel comfortable with the drug reference though. *shrug*
    That's when you tell 'em to suck it up and drive on. Hell, the average 8 year old knows what weed looks like anyway.

    Personally, I like the drug-trip interpretation.

    There's very little you can do in reference to caustic acid. Maybe retint fire green or somethin'. Rad/Fire blasters do well. Or you can try a fire/rad corrupter.
  12. Quote:
    Originally Posted by Oldeb View Post
    Wouldn't work.

    The stealth breaks if you attack or move.

    Aaaand how do you know this?
  13. Quote:
    Originally Posted by Valentyna View Post
    Want!

    I'm so happy I came back from CO.
    Welcome home. Now go wash that CO-gunk offa' ya.

    In reference to this news...


    "WHOOOO! Guess who's gon' preorda'?! THIS GUY!"
  14. Quote:
    Originally Posted by Tank_Washington View Post
    One of the most quickly annoying catch phrases in recent memory, but good for the Aints fans it's been awhile.
    Shut your blasphemous lips, non-Saints fan!


    No, in all seriousness, this was one of the best football games I've seen in a long time. One of the best seasons I've watched in my lifetime. I'm an old Saints fan. Like, paper bag old, lol. So I'm thoroughly enjoying this.
  15. I give it 2 weeks before it's completely defunct.

    /e chuckles and exits stage left
  16. No debt badges, lots of AE badges.

    Yeah, I'd say PLed.
  17. Quote:
    Originally Posted by XeroCurve View Post
    There are about 10 folks in it right now, but there not active. This is one of those things that a few people get hyped on then it fizzles pretty quick for the most part.
    Probably because it's a bad idea. I was gonna write this whole diatribe, but, nah.

    Quote:
    A SG mate of mine got a level 50 TA/Archery Defender PuG'ing all the way to 50 without dying once.

    "Bullsh*t!"
  18. Quote:
    Originally Posted by Sister_Twelve View Post
    lol

    I really don't see how pointing out that you are just flat out wrong and that the administator who is in charge of officiating in the NFL agrees with that qualifies as me 'crying,' especially since I really didn't care whether the Saints or the Vikings made the Superbowl.

    But I guess when you have no answer to logic, you go with the only answer you've got.
  19. Quote:
    Originally Posted by Sister_Twelve View Post
    Well, the NFL vice-president of officiating disagrees with you. He's said publicly that the low hit on Favre should have been a personal foul and the first interception should have been nullified.

    McCray has also been fined $20,000 for the hit and another in the game.
    Cry more.