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Hey Grey. With your Fan Fiction review, you didnt leave a link to connect to the rest of the story.
Can you post it here so I can check it out?

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Sorry, the link got lost somewhere in the proofing.

Kat Scratched Fever (Mynx's Story)

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TY

Hey Grey. With your Fan Fiction review, you didnt leave a link to connect to the rest of the story.
Can you post it here so I can check it out?

Looks great.
His left hand looks good but it does seem like he is almost flicking us off with his right hand lol.

Besides that, i'd love to see it fully done, inked and colored.

How was the comic though?

The next issue of the Justice-Knights is now live!

A few notes.
1. Didnt go with LJs cover because I am saving it for ish 4 or 5 (they are better stories anyways)
and also my friend did this amazing art of Sin and Madcap and this is the last time we see Madcap for awhile so went with this.
LJ, I hope ya dont mind and if you take offense, I apologize.

Now, next up is another and FINAL change to the website I use.
I now use www.justiceknights.net for the official website of both the comics and my sg.
When you first go to the website, click on the picture on the left to take you to the comic book site.

PDF and issuu formats will be available and the PDFs will load amazingly fast compared to before.

Hope you all enjoy it and the new site and PLEASE LEAVE YOUR FEEDBACK!
It helps me learn, especially when trying out new styles like I did for this issue.

Also, for the next comics release, should I make a new thread or keep with this one? I still consider myself new to the forums and was looking for feedback on that aswell -- what is approprate and whatnot.

Thanks and later all!

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I love the girl's smile. It's terrifying.

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I feel more the eyes but yeah lol

That is so freaken cool.

Wish there were move panels that showed the fight scene more but hey, its still FREAKEN COOL.

They remind me of the childred of the corn...

Please dont kill me

Seriously though, good art but it lacks personality is all.

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Here.

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Win!

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Ah... I actually created the Last Avatar before a certain bald headed little Air Bender's adventures were aired on Nickelodeon. A certain irony in that, everyone asks me the same question

This Last Avatar was actually "empowered" (more accurately "reborn") through the intervention of my other heroine Albtraum.

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I know a bit how you feel. I made Sin Stalker ALONG time before CoV was even in the works and everyone assumes I am a cov stalker named Sin Stalker when infact I am a scrapper... lol

Great art but I am a bit confused...

Did Aang grow hair and boobs and get older?

Also did he get into leather and got rid of the bending or is the black stuff actually air or water bending.

lol JK.
Really great. Very classic cover.

Did it cost ya anything?
And if so, how much?

Mua HAHAHAHAHAH!

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Sh!

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P.S. I didnt do it. *points with an outstretched arm* It was Mad Mummy...

Its so peeerrrrrddddyy....

Me likey arty!
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Hope to see more.

Awesome.

This is the kind of work that makes me want to see what you do next and very soon.
So...

Make another art piece very soon please and private tell me when you get it done pleeeeeaaaaaseeeee?!
LOL
JK about the private tell (although i would like one so I dont miss the post) but I definatly want to see more very soon.

Again, Awesome work.

If anything, i bet the companies are fine with it.

First off they get free publicity.

Secondly, companies dont care unless you are making thousands of dollars. A few hundred or less they dont care. Especially since they would probably be paying more than that for said publicity.

Also, I think there are loop holes when it comes to peoples art. As long as they arnt ripping off someone elses work or a comic over or whatever, (basically, original) than I think there are outs if they ever did call someone on it.

Not sure about that third thing but the first 2 are the main points.

Great work.

I am so jealous.

oh my gawwd!!! She's destroy the engines of that plane!!!!

Somebody help those people!!!! She's gonna make them crash!!!

JK.

Seriously, great job. It looks awesome!

I read a comment in the thread about her face. Her face isnt that bad but its probably the weakest part of the art.

You mentioned the superman family being so powerful they dont really need to try.
Well I wanted to comment on that. There are pretty much two mentalitys to superman. 1. is that they are extremely powerful andsaving a plane doesnt really efffect them cuz its so easy. Well in this situation I'd say make the face appear more relaxed. If its that easy, she should be confident and KNOW everything is already and thats its just an easy fix (like hitting the delete kick when you mispell something.).

2. there is the version you see sometimes like in the 90s Superman cartoon series where they made him less powerful. In this situation then id say put worry, put fatique or whatnot on there face.

But for the most part, since you are going for the first and more common version, id say maybe make her more relaxed and easy going since the issue is such an easy fix.

Again, great job!

Great work yet again.

I just want to say though that after 2 pages of her doing her RL thing, Id love to see some superhero action

Great work again LJ. I love the more traditional feel the two heroines have with the classic villain taking them on.

I love that pic titled "Stalking & Sin Stalker" especially since its my characters lol.

I just have to point this out but... Its actually Stalkling & Sin Stalker. Stalk Ling. Like changling or underling.

And Stalkling is Sin Stalker's side kick for those at all curious... which I am pretty sure comes to a total of 0 lol.

If you do want to know more about them, check out www.justiceknights.net for there comic book series I am making.

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well i was going to put this with the original post, but i didnt see an option to edit .. weird.

anyhoo, heres page 2, its a continuation of the phone call from the first page. this is based on an actual phone call, almost word for word!
no lie!

Clawkitty page 2

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LMAO.

Awesomeness abound, I kinda wish youd not release it page for page and instead hold off and release either with each issue or every 10 pages or something.
I prefer issues and/or clumps.

Just call me a clumpy kinda guy

Honestly, awesome work.
I dont see anything wrong with the paneling or the art so I am not sure what the post before mine went but oh well.

The only thing I noticed is that you could have probably had that whole conversation in 2 or 3 panels instead of 4. The only reason I point this out is because I wanted more lol!
I wish it wouldnt have ended there and went with the joke so panel 3 or 4 continued the story so I can get a sense of where its heading but unfortunatly you didnt do that.

I figure thats a good thing that the only prob I have with it is that I wanted more, hehe.

Really, so cool.

I had a question. Did you ever think of doing the comic and not coloring it right away?

I was thinking it might end up being quicker to just draw and pen it and upload it for all of us. Then once you have big clumps done or a full issue down, then go back and color it.
This question is also just me wondering how to get this thing out of you quicker.

Really great work and can hardly wait for the next SEVERAL pages.

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Freedom Phalanx

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Wonderful, just wonderful.
Great job. Perhaps oneday I could convince you to do one of those with keymembers of my sg. lol

I love there pudgyness.

Pudgy pudgy!

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Also, someone could snap pictures of her in action, then bring them in to be developed the next day. Now she has to decide whether or not to conveniently discover they're "ruined" or all underexposed.

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lol I like that one too.

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Heh, I read the balancing part and thought that it might be cute to occasionally use a story idea where her two lives intersect, like her doing her usual hero thing in saving a person, and that person ending up to be a customers of hers, one that wasn't too bright or rude, etc. tons of possibilities to take from that.

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Or maybe its one of those rude costumers who now needs to be saved and we see Claw debating with herself if she actually SHOULD save them. lol

Then when she does and flies or jumps off, instead of saying something heroic she says "And remember! Be kind to your photo store people!"

"Dont worry ClawKitty! I wil... wait what?"