Ok, i know this is my first story, so dont be TOO harsh.
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James Rush was born in Compton California on 1971 to a bellow par family that lived on Piru street. He was a healthy child [as far as the doctors could see], was very friendly to his older brother Chris, and got Above average grades in school.
However, at age 11, he ran into the Notorious street gang known today as the Crips while walking back from school. There were 3 of them. One was short and stubby, just about James' size. One was tall and wore blue bandanas on his arm. The last one was almost engraved with all the tattoos on his arms. James could smell the familliar scent of weed- a scent that was common to his nose.
"Yo lil' man!" said the tall one. His voice was raspy nad James could tell he smoked.
"Wanna join our cool 'club'....".
"Uhh...not now.." James retorted almost automatically.
"But its off da chain" said the short Crip. He had a solid gold tooth and as he spoke he trailed off in his words.
"Look, i know who you punks are, yall the Crips. My big brother told me about you. You aint nothing but trouble" James said.
The three Crips begain mumbling to one another and spoke with a heavy dose of slang and cussing. The thing that scared James the most was that they said the name of his brother over and over again.
"Fine then, we don't need yo lil [censored] in the Crips anyway." Said the short crip.
All three of the crips walked away. James had a burning feeling in his stomach. Not from the encounter with crips, but for the fact that some how his brother Chris was related to them...
During the night, James awoke to the sound of his mom crying downstairs. He rushed down there, where he found her, his dad, and a polic officer.
"Wha-what happend?" said James sheepishly.
With a deep sigh, the officer replied to his question.
"James... I'm afraid your brother has been shot and killed by the Crips..."
"NOOOO..that can't be! Why???!" yelled James desperatly [sp]
"Well, James, Chris was a big time drug dealer for the Bloods. Earlier today the Crips were recruiting others for a massive assualt on him and his drug ring. The co-leader of this part of Compton is known as Lil Blue and is followed by his 'guards', Ink and 40 Z."
Immdiatly James thought of the three goons he saw earlier today.
"I-I.." James begain to ball up his fist, but soon realized he was powerless to stop the Crips....for now. He walked back upstairs into his room. He couldn't dechipher who he was more mad at; the crips for killing his brother, or the Bloods for bringing his brother in this. Then that night he made a vow. A vow that he should avenge his brother for his death...
Over the years, James had begain working out at the gym. Ironically, his grades slipped ,too. He begain street fighting to toughen his body up. Under the name 'G', he quickly defeated all of his opponents.
"Yo, dat dude is crazy! It's like he has some sort of super powers that makes him stronger and he can take a few slugs to da head too!" said Kenny the fist, leader of the unofficial street fights.
At 18, James dropped out of Compton County College.
"I don't think it will matter to my future" he said to his parents who were furious at his actions.
At age 19, he was the Street Fighting Champion of Compton. He now could participate in the State finals in L.A., where he heard that Lil Blue was attending. Perhaps he could even the score with Blue and be Champion at the same time.
So James ran away from home with some clothes, 300 dollars, and a mental list the states-
Things to do- 1 Kill Lil Blue. 2 Win tournament. 3 Avoid police.
But before he reached the tournament, he spotted Lil Blue at a resturant. The sight of him made him rage with anger. He hastily broke into the resturant and did a Haymaker on Lil Blue, which automatically killed him. It seemed that 40 Z and Ink wre replaced with bigger brutes. James rushed [no pun intended] at the first one, sending him threw a glass window. The second one grabbed a broken beer bottle and tryed to smash it on James, but to his surprise it shattered about 3 inches away from his skin..it was like he had a shield protecting him. James countered with a uppercut to the chin, sending the brute up into the sky and landing on a table, which broke. By the time polic arrived withe drones, they found him mercilessly stomping on the body of a bodyguard.
"THATS WHAT YOU GET FOR KILLING MY BROTHER!!!" he screamed. He was about to say more was zapped by a polic drone and sent to the Ziggaraut, a place where super powered threats are imprisoned. He was sentanced to Jail For Life, but that wasn't the thing that bothered him. He knew that he ruined his life, and that IF he escaped this Hell-Hole, he couldnt get a job or have a normal life. Ever. Again.
James begain working out again in the Zig, and was given the AT title 'Brute'.
"What the Hell is a Brute?" he said to the warden.
"What you are.." the warden replied flattly.
4 years after being sent to Zig, Arachnos planned a huge scale jail break for the Zig and exucuted [sp] it. Thousands and thousands of thugs swarmed out of Prison. "Yes! Recluse has opened a window of hope for me.." he mumbled while arrising from his cell. But he needed a costume and a name. Quickly, he raided the supplies of the Jail, stealing 2 black bandanas, some leather boots, tech pants, and two dandoliers of bullets.
" I need a good name still.." he mumbled.
"The death destroyer! Hells fist! Bob!" he thought out loud.
"Ahh screw it. I'll just use Dark G. Short and simple, nothing flasy or crappy." he said
He took a gulp of fresh air as he walked out of the Zig.
"Well, i guess I'm an Official Villian." he said
"Yeah, don't get too cocky.." said the Arachnos Pilot.
"I won't" he replied
"But i still don't know what the hell is a brute.."
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As I said before, this is my first story, so lay off the criticism!