Flame_Fire

My mates villain will do good for this, hes appearing in my story so if he goes in yours they couold tie in His name is Demon Shrimpdude from Defiant and his globel is @Shrimpdude but if u want to contact me its at @Flame Fire !! It would be good if these do tie together, becasue then i could include your guy as well especial since u were the only person who put a comment on my story be sure to read page 2 and 3 as well please

These are the last 2 pages before it goes into a flashback of Flame Fire and Electrocharges first mission together (not in game, in story! First mish i think was when Electro was lvl 2 against Hellions... ahh good times). I have shortend the names of Flame Fire and Electrocharge becasue its easyer lol. I have introduced some more guys into the next few pages who are acctual real guys i have played with online and gotten to know quite well, hope u dont mind if ur reading this!! Please note that the pages after this contain violence that people might not be happy with so if you would like me to post the next few pages i need confermation that it is ok to included the vilent parts as i dont really know how i can take them out, esspecially as on about page 13 it plays a big part in the introduction of a new villain. Well, here are the pages:

This day couldn’t get any worse, Flame thought on the way back through Brickstown. First I get waken up, then I find that I’m here and not Las Vegas and then Charlie’s dam suit breaks again! What could be worse!! I really am in a bad mood…
“Ummm…Ben?” said Charlie.
“Shhhhsss!!! Its heroes names when we are out here!” Ben whispered.
“Oh ok, Flame Fire? I think my suits getting worse… I told you I couldn’t go in to that sewer yesterday after I modified my suit… I told you it wasn’t waterproof even if the Rikti were gunna attack Atlas Park again but noooo…” said Charlie. Charlie’s suit was the source of his power; a device attached to his belt that he had built allowed him to do all the amazing things he does.
“Do you know how many people we saved in there yesterday Electrocharge? Oh my god!! No? We saved dozens of people they were using as test subjects! You think we should have left it to a couple of Newbie heroes to face Rikti?? Rikti for dams sake! Our other option was going for blimming Council on Striga and you know I’m not going there again,” shouted Flame.
“I’m just saying I think I need to land somewhere and check up on my suit,” said Electro, a little taken back as Flame hadn’t shouted at him for a long time.
“Got any ideas on where we could go? We’re in Brickstown man! You want to go to the Zig? Oh I’m sure the prisoners would be really happy to see a hero there especially when they have no flipping powers!!” mocked Flame. This was when Electro started to get a little embarrassed. A crowd of people had started to gather under them with lots of people pointing and taking pictures.
“Hey look! Its Flame Fire and Electrocharge of the British Battlers!! And their arguing!!” someone shouted from below.
“Common, I think we need to get out of here,” said Flame. “Electro? Common man!” but Electro just hovered there; his eyes were closed. The electricity around him started to crackle away and then he fell. “Oh don’t you fall you…!” shouted Flame through gritted teeth as he flew down to grab his sidekick. “I’m getting you to the infirmary!” Flame swooped Electro up and flew as fast as he could with the added weight towards Brickstown Infirmary.

Charlie woke up in the medical bed; he had some experience in this field and knew that if he was in a sealed room like this one something wasn’t right. He stood up and looked around at the room; it was a typical hospital room. He also noticed his costume was no where to be found. Charlie pulled a curtain back and noticed a window into a different room. Ben was talking to someone in there in his normal cloths which was basically the same as his costume but without the glowing eyes and he had changed his trousers. People believe anything, thought Charlie, they just couldn’t see people like Ben being a mutant and so all he has to do is change his trousers and suddenly he’s your mild mannered civilian. Ben finished talking with the doctor, walked up to the window and pressed a button. Suddenly Charlie could hear him.
“Hey Charlie, we got a little bit of a problem. Your “baggage” is fine and sorted” Ben gave him a wink. Charlie thought about what his baggage could be and accepted that it would have to be his costume and not something else. “The only problem is, mate, that the Rikti got you with something. You’re giving off some radiation that disables electrical stuff. It’s not that strong of a field yet but stuff that you’re in contact with will be disabled. Its kina like you’re a great big EMP.” Ben always had the best way of summing things up. He had been able to do it as long as Charlie had known him which was when his contact in Paragon City Hall new heroes section had paired them up for the mission which changed both their lives.


Oh, and happy double exp weekend, i hope to see you all on when i get home on Saturday Night!!

Flame Fire out !!

yay first post lol at last! page 2 will be posted... ohhh at the weekend when i can next get to it so look froward to that!

Here is the first page of my story. So far i have typed up 12 pages on word. This is just a teaser, if i get good comments i will post page 2 . Hope u like

Flame Fire and Electrocharge

Chapter 1: The Beginning

People were screaming all around him as explosions tore through the house. He clambered through the wreckage towards the room he wished hadn’t been affected but knew looked just like the rest of the apartment building. Another explosion made Ben wince. The flames were getting closer and Ben thought that he might not last much longer. He got to the door of that room, the room everything was about. A blinding white light and…

Ben Frisby, Hero to Paragon City and ex-fire fighter woke up to something no body deserved to wake up to no matter what they had done. His close friend and Sidekick Charlie Lomax was standing over Ben’s bed with a big grin on his face. Ben’s face at this time was a mix of surprise and confusion as he slowly lifted the sheets over his face and pinched his arm hoping that this was a dream and that he would wake up in Las Vegas or somewhere surrounded by women.
“No…go away I want sleep…” said Ben. Charlie, the technological hero, pulled the sheets off Ben and pushed him out of the bed on to the floor.
“Crime waits for no man, Benny Boy so get up and put some clothes on,” said Charlie, “it’s already nearly 10:30 and we were meant to be at the Cray factory about that crazy test subject at 9 o’clock!!”
30 minutes later Ben had got dressed into his brand new outfit. It wasn’t really a costume such as Charlie’s which was a one-piece yellow spandex suit with black lightning marks, a matching cape and about 2 bottles of hair gel. Ben’s suit was just your average outfit, a maroon T-shirt, black baggy trousers with red flames up the side and a black trench coat which Ben had just bought from Larry’s Leathers in Steel Canyon. The only thing about Ben’s costume which would have made him show up in a group of civilians was that when he was powered up fire would literally come out of his eyes as if they were on fire. Charlie had tried to offer to sort this out for Ben but he always said no, he kind of liked it anyway. Ben opened the window of his apartment; it was a big floor to ceiling window, he had to have it specially made, and jumped out. His eyes suddenly began to fire up and he went from falling to a steady rise up towards the sky. Charlie was quick to follow, his body now emitting a week electrical field keeping him up which made blue sparks flash across his body. These young heroes were no longer just Ben and Charlie; they were Flame Fire and Electrocharge.
They didn’t get to the Cray Lab till 2:30 that afternoon. Electrocharge was having trouble with his suit, the source of his power because being a technological hero brought its disadvantages, which slowed down his fly speed which meant that they had to fly all the way from Flame Fires apartment in the south of Steel Canyon all the way to the north (which would have taken Flame on his own about 10 minutes) to get the Monorail to Brickstown through Croatoa where they could get to Cray’s folly instead of just flying the much faster way to Independence Port then to Brickstown..
When they got to Cray’s folly they were told by the Cray people that it was all under control. Flame doubted this as he could hear explosions in the background. It was always difficult for Heroes to get involved with Cray activity, especially if they hadn’t done something wrong, like now. They were escorted out of the building by 2 Paragon Protectors; there's was nothing Flame or Electro could do.

What? Your playing a fire/fire/fire blaster and you don't want to get up close and die? If you don't want to die don't be a fire blaster! My mains a fire blaster and you have to get up close and die, other wise its no fun... KILL UM WITH MELLE!

Flame Fire, away!! Bring back Siren's the heroes!!

Oh No! Ur not my good m8 James are u Meer?

I'm sorry man but,3 REPLYS TO YOU'RE SLEF????Phhhhererer..... [censored]!!! Come on man! Pull you slef together!! Sheesshh ....

Thanks man.

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on a bit of a tangent: I wish we could have split floor rooms, or a second story in the base..

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now that would be cool

Sorry if this is a bit of a noob quiestion but... while building my base i put the secret entrance on to a higher floor i made then i was hoping to put steps on them, but, i cant find them.... where r they???? Help!!!!


[u]No Mercy[u]

Hey All! Me and my good friend Rolo have started up a supergroup on villians, No Mercy! We have about 10 members at time of writing and are looking for more! If you would ike to join our super group just reply below or send a message to @Shrimpdude v2.0 or @Flame Fire to get a place! We're active and we like to help new players! We have a base with a medical bay and 3 rooms, we're just saving up for a generater. So send us a message, we're waiting!!!

I totaly forgot about it thought it was day after till my m8 rang up about going to a cricket show thing and i looked in my little book thing and remembered. Totaly my falt, soz.

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Yay! 2 Apologies in one day! Everyone is happy!!!

I accept your apology Flameo!

(Even though I have never met you!)

*dances*


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Yay lol! Looks like we're all feeling aplogetic today!

*Dances and falls over*
ow...

Hi, i'd just like to publicly say sorry to everyone who was on the caven of trandisions mish (or somit like that ) earler today. I had to go afk becasue i had forgoten about a important job interview and my game was takening agers to load and i just didnt have the time to wait. I know ur all probly still mad at me but, i say again, i'm really sorry and i should have waited.... i hope u can except this aplogy as i fell really bad about abanderning u all there.

lol thanks Alvan, i'll get it first before i change my mind now, and as u said, i can alwasy respec l8er.

Hi, i'm going to get fly for my Master mind and i was wondering, is there anyway for ur minions to fly with u? I got robots so do i have to get group fly or will they just run along the ground?

My robots mm is called Tecno Gear and hes got
Battle Drones:
Slinnky
Pinnky

Protector bots:
Dinkky

and the next one i get will be winnky
lol

I was really looking forward to tonight i canceled every thing and now i'm fully booked for the weekend so i wont be able to come but i will still be at pocket d tonight with all of the other sados and people who dont know yet...

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heh, you know what? I just had an idea

call me crazy (most people do) but like me, a very small selection of players have no dates. I don't mind this, I got yr 11 leavers prom soon and I'm gonna be alone anyway.

however, other players who have no dates don't like this. so, heres the thing; my latest bad idea is a dating service. it'll just be a small forum thread were players who need dates would put in a post with anything they want to add to get another players attention (that last part wont go down well) but still, it'll give a sutable line up if people are desperate, bored or like to meet new people.

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i like this idea, but who cares what i think?
Flame Fire lv 24 blaster

Any one want to join Dark Fire?? Send me a message in game!!!
Flame Fire, Lv 24 blaster.

I'm looking foward to this, anyone want to be my date??

Flame Fire
Fire blaster lv 24
and a great dancer

Just wondering if anyone else can get on definant or is it just me ATM?

how do u get to paragon dance party?

When and where is this event???