Flame Fire and Electrocharge (page 1)
By
Flame_Fire,
Posted on: 2007-06-09 07:40 in Multi-Media Fan Creations
I'm interested in reading more please.... 
yay first post lol at last! page 2 will be posted... ohhh at the weekend when i can next get to it so look froward to that!
@Flame Fire
Defiant:
Flame Fire - 50 - Blaster
Joey Poison - 50 - Master Mind
Star-Flare - 41 - Peacebringer
Operative Flame - 26 - Bane Spider
CoH Vids
Here is the first page of my story. So far i have typed up 12 pages on word. This is just a teaser, if i get good comments i will post page 2
. Hope u like 
Flame Fire and Electrocharge
Chapter 1: The Beginning
People were screaming all around him as explosions tore through the house. He clambered through the wreckage towards the room he wished hadnt been affected but knew looked just like the rest of the apartment building. Another explosion made Ben wince. The flames were getting closer and Ben thought that he might not last much longer. He got to the door of that room, the room everything was about. A blinding white light and
Ben Frisby, Hero to Paragon City and ex-fire fighter woke up to something no body deserved to wake up to no matter what they had done. His close friend and Sidekick Charlie Lomax was standing over Bens bed with a big grin on his face. Bens face at this time was a mix of surprise and confusion as he slowly lifted the sheets over his face and pinched his arm hoping that this was a dream and that he would wake up in Las Vegas or somewhere surrounded by women.
No go away I want sleep said Ben. Charlie, the technological hero, pulled the sheets off Ben and pushed him out of the bed on to the floor.
Crime waits for no man, Benny Boy so get up and put some clothes on, said Charlie, its already nearly 10:30 and we were meant to be at the Cray factory about that crazy test subject at 9 oclock!!
30 minutes later Ben had got dressed into his brand new outfit. It wasnt really a costume such as Charlies which was a one-piece yellow spandex suit with black lightning marks, a matching cape and about 2 bottles of hair gel. Bens suit was just your average outfit, a maroon T-shirt, black baggy trousers with red flames up the side and a black trench coat which Ben had just bought from Larrys Leathers in Steel Canyon. The only thing about Bens costume which would have made him show up in a group of civilians was that when he was powered up fire would literally come out of his eyes as if they were on fire. Charlie had tried to offer to sort this out for Ben but he always said no, he kind of liked it anyway. Ben opened the window of his apartment; it was a big floor to ceiling window, he had to have it specially made, and jumped out. His eyes suddenly began to fire up and he went from falling to a steady rise up towards the sky. Charlie was quick to follow, his body now emitting a week electrical field keeping him up which made blue sparks flash across his body. These young heroes were no longer just Ben and Charlie; they were Flame Fire and Electrocharge.
They didnt get to the Cray Lab till 2:30 that afternoon. Electrocharge was having trouble with his suit, the source of his power because being a technological hero brought its disadvantages, which slowed down his fly speed which meant that they had to fly all the way from Flame Fires apartment in the south of Steel Canyon all the way to the north (which would have taken Flame on his own about 10 minutes) to get the Monorail to Brickstown through Croatoa where they could get to Crays folly instead of just flying the much faster way to Independence Port then to Brickstown..
When they got to Crays folly they were told by the Cray people that it was all under control. Flame doubted this as he could hear explosions in the background. It was always difficult for Heroes to get involved with Cray activity, especially if they hadnt done something wrong, like now. They were escorted out of the building by 2 Paragon Protectors; there's was nothing Flame or Electro could do.
@Flame Fire
Defiant:
Flame Fire - 50 - Blaster
Joey Poison - 50 - Master Mind
Star-Flare - 41 - Peacebringer
Operative Flame - 26 - Bane Spider
CoH Vids