These are the last 2 pages before it goes into a flashback of Flame Fire and Electrocharges first mission together (not in game, in story! First mish i think was when Electro was lvl 2 against Hellions... ahh good times). I have shortend the names of Flame Fire and Electrocharge becasue its easyer lol. I have introduced some more guys into the next few pages who are acctual real guys i have played with online and gotten to know quite well, hope u dont mind if ur reading this!! Please note that the pages after this contain violence that people might not be happy with so if you would like me to post the next few pages i need confermation that it is ok to included the vilent parts as i dont really know how i can take them out, esspecially as on about page 13 it plays a big part in the introduction of a new villain. Well, here are the pages:
This day couldnt get any worse, Flame thought on the way back through Brickstown. First I get waken up, then I find that Im here and not Las Vegas and then Charlies dam suit breaks again! What could be worse!! I really am in a bad mood
Ummm Ben? said Charlie.
Shhhhsss!!! Its heroes names when we are out here! Ben whispered.
Oh ok, Flame Fire? I think my suits getting worse I told you I couldnt go in to that sewer yesterday after I modified my suit I told you it wasnt waterproof even if the Rikti were gunna attack Atlas Park again but noooo said Charlie. Charlies suit was the source of his power; a device attached to his belt that he had built allowed him to do all the amazing things he does.
Do you know how many people we saved in there yesterday Electrocharge? Oh my god!! No? We saved dozens of people they were using as test subjects! You think we should have left it to a couple of Newbie heroes to face Rikti?? Rikti for dams sake! Our other option was going for blimming Council on Striga and you know Im not going there again, shouted Flame.
Im just saying I think I need to land somewhere and check up on my suit, said Electro, a little taken back as Flame hadnt shouted at him for a long time.
Got any ideas on where we could go? Were in Brickstown man! You want to go to the Zig? Oh Im sure the prisoners would be really happy to see a hero there especially when they have no flipping powers!! mocked Flame. This was when Electro started to get a little embarrassed. A crowd of people had started to gather under them with lots of people pointing and taking pictures.
Hey look! Its Flame Fire and Electrocharge of the British Battlers!! And their arguing!! someone shouted from below.
Common, I think we need to get out of here, said Flame. Electro? Common man! but Electro just hovered there; his eyes were closed. The electricity around him started to crackle away and then he fell. Oh dont you fall you ! shouted Flame through gritted teeth as he flew down to grab his sidekick. Im getting you to the infirmary! Flame swooped Electro up and flew as fast as he could with the added weight towards Brickstown Infirmary.
Charlie woke up in the medical bed; he had some experience in this field and knew that if he was in a sealed room like this one something wasnt right. He stood up and looked around at the room; it was a typical hospital room. He also noticed his costume was no where to be found. Charlie pulled a curtain back and noticed a window into a different room. Ben was talking to someone in there in his normal cloths which was basically the same as his costume but without the glowing eyes and he had changed his trousers. People believe anything, thought Charlie, they just couldnt see people like Ben being a mutant and so all he has to do is change his trousers and suddenly hes your mild mannered civilian. Ben finished talking with the doctor, walked up to the window and pressed a button. Suddenly Charlie could hear him.
Hey Charlie, we got a little bit of a problem. Your baggage is fine and sorted Ben gave him a wink. Charlie thought about what his baggage could be and accepted that it would have to be his costume and not something else. The only problem is, mate, that the Rikti got you with something. Youre giving off some radiation that disables electrical stuff. Its not that strong of a field yet but stuff that youre in contact with will be disabled. Its kina like youre a great big EMP. Ben always had the best way of summing things up. He had been able to do it as long as Charlie had known him which was when his contact in Paragon City Hall new heroes section had paired them up for the mission which changed both their lives.
Oh, and happy double exp weekend, i hope to see you all on when i get home on Saturday Night!!
These are the last 2 pages before it goes into a flashback of Flame Fire and Electrocharges first mission together (not in game, in story! First mish i think was when Electro was lvl 2 against Hellions... ahh good times). I have shortend the names of Flame Fire and Electrocharge becasue its easyer lol. I have introduced some more guys into the next few pages who are acctual real guys i have played with online and gotten to know quite well, hope u dont mind if ur reading this!! Please note that the pages after this contain violence that people might not be happy with so if you would like me to post the next few pages i need confermation that it is ok to included the vilent parts as i dont really know how i can take them out, esspecially as on about page 13 it plays a big part in the introduction of a new villain. Well, here are the pages:
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This day couldnt get any worse, Flame thought on the way back through Brickstown. First I get waken up, then I find that Im here and not Las Vegas and then Charlies dam suit breaks again! What could be worse!! I really am in a bad mood
Ummm Ben? said Charlie.
Shhhhsss!!! Its heroes names when we are out here! Ben whispered.
Oh ok, Flame Fire? I think my suits getting worse I told you I couldnt go in to that sewer yesterday after I modified my suit I told you it wasnt waterproof even if the Rikti were gunna attack Atlas Park again but noooo said Charlie. Charlies suit was the source of his power; a device attached to his belt that he had built allowed him to do all the amazing things he does.
Do you know how many people we saved in there yesterday Electrocharge? Oh my god!! No? We saved dozens of people they were using as test subjects! You think we should have left it to a couple of Newbie heroes to face Rikti?? Rikti for dams sake! Our other option was going for blimming Council on Striga and you know Im not going there again, shouted Flame.
Im just saying I think I need to land somewhere and check up on my suit, said Electro, a little taken back as Flame hadnt shouted at him for a long time.
Got any ideas on where we could go? Were in Brickstown man! You want to go to the Zig? Oh Im sure the prisoners would be really happy to see a hero there especially when they have no flipping powers!! mocked Flame. This was when Electro started to get a little embarrassed. A crowd of people had started to gather under them with lots of people pointing and taking pictures.
Hey look! Its Flame Fire and Electrocharge of the British Battlers!! And their arguing!! someone shouted from below.
Common, I think we need to get out of here, said Flame. Electro? Common man! but Electro just hovered there; his eyes were closed. The electricity around him started to crackle away and then he fell. Oh dont you fall you ! shouted Flame through gritted teeth as he flew down to grab his sidekick. Im getting you to the infirmary! Flame swooped Electro up and flew as fast as he could with the added weight towards Brickstown Infirmary.
Charlie woke up in the medical bed; he had some experience in this field and knew that if he was in a sealed room like this one something wasnt right. He stood up and looked around at the room; it was a typical hospital room. He also noticed his costume was no where to be found. Charlie pulled a curtain back and noticed a window into a different room. Ben was talking to someone in there in his normal cloths which was basically the same as his costume but without the glowing eyes and he had changed his trousers. People believe anything, thought Charlie, they just couldnt see people like Ben being a mutant and so all he has to do is change his trousers and suddenly hes your mild mannered civilian. Ben finished talking with the doctor, walked up to the window and pressed a button. Suddenly Charlie could hear him.
Hey Charlie, we got a little bit of a problem. Your baggage is fine and sorted Ben gave him a wink. Charlie thought about what his baggage could be and accepted that it would have to be his costume and not something else. The only problem is, mate, that the Rikti got you with something. Youre giving off some radiation that disables electrical stuff. Its not that strong of a field yet but stuff that youre in contact with will be disabled. Its kina like youre a great big EMP. Ben always had the best way of summing things up. He had been able to do it as long as Charlie had known him which was when his contact in Paragon City Hall new heroes section had paired them up for the mission which changed both their lives.
Oh, and happy double exp weekend, i hope to see you all on when i get home on Saturday Night!!
Flame Fire out
@Flame Fire
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Operative Flame - 26 - Bane Spider
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