EminentDomain

Thank-you for the review. I will take your suggestions and try to implement them. I was afraid that too much info to read would scare some players away. My first instinct was to add some info, should have went with my first instinct. Add some more meat on the bones.

I tried to leave the artifacts as un-named to add some mystery to the story. So that the player didn't know exactly what it was until he/she found it.

Like I said, it's my first arc. Not sure why the number changed at all. Possibly when I republished it. I must have messed something up with that.

The 4 of the same boss at the end I'm not sure about. There should only be one. Possibly a bug. I only had one when I solo'd it.

My first story-arc. I wanted to make it interesting so there are lots of clues and some NPC dialog. I've added mine and my wife's characters as both allies and villains. Full bios are there on the characters for the backstory.

Arc ID: 243619
Keywords: Custom Characters, Origin Story, Mystery
Length: Long
First Published: 06/30/2009 02:57PM
Morality: Heroic
Mission 1: Small size map, level range 30-54, Contains Collection, Ally
Mission 2: Small size map, level range 1-54, Contains Ambush, Boss, Collection, Ally
Mission 3: Medium size map, level range 46-54, Contains Boss, Collection, Ally
Mission 4: Large size map, level range 1-54, Contains, Boss, A Defendable Object, Ally
Enemy Groups: 5th Column, Rikti, Custom Group, Snakes
Description: Help the archeologist find the three ancient artifacts...
Story Status: Looking for Feedback
WARNING! Storyarc May Contain: Archvillains, Elite Bosses

Title: A Monumental Occasion
Arc ID: 243619
Length: Long (4 missions)
Morality: Heroic

Synopsis: An archeologist has asked Atlas University's help in obtaining 3 ancient artifacts for research. But what it turns out being is a scavenger hunt with a twist. Three allies will help you along the way, with a possible Arch-Villain in the last mission.

I'm looking mainly for feedback/critique since this is my first attempt at MA.

Wondering if anybody has used this software. I just purchased it yesterday and it seems fun. I have to play around with it some more...maybe I'll even post some pics.

/signed

Sounds great and can be written in quite well into a story-arc/mission series.
Kind of like the other Co-op missions during the Events.

Series of Missions

Mission 1a - A hero or group can Complete

Mission 1b - A villain or group can Complete

Contact - Our "informant/blackmail victim" won't give us any more information until we ensure their safety. He/She tells us that they will only speak with you personally. Would you like to speak to informant/blackmail victim?

You - Click “Yes or No”

" NO " you cannot go further in that storyline but you can cancel it through contact.

" YES " an informant/blackmail victim will now be able to UNLOCK the next mission in the story which will be in their respective turfs.

You will then be able to access the “Informant/Blackmail Victim” list in the “Looking for Team”. You will then take your pick of who you might want to be teamed with.

Mission 2a - "Together" you complete the required mission in informant/victims home turf.

Contact - Our informant/victim has asked for a deal in return for giving us the information. You must accompany them on their task/mission.

Mission 2b - "Together" you complete the required mission in your turf (so that the informant/victim gets a chance to see the other side.

Note about the missions, they could be just “payment” for the informants or for the victim to give to his blackmailers in the form of finding a RANDOM SECRET set of badges which only the respective hero or villain could see on the map, which would be normal badges for that zone that have been moved to other random locations to prevent those with vidiotmaps from printing the maps out a head of time (the other participants map would be blacked out and continue to be blacked out until they've accumulated enough Fame points...see end), or they could be to hunt a certain number of a certain type of villain/hero group to get information on the blackmail or revenge for the informant (which would give them access to the other KILL Badges).

Added Bonus would be that you would not get any Mission Bonus or Badges UNLESS Missions 2a & 2b were completed (for those who might lose connection/or had to leave the pc for a time or those who want to be VILLAINOUS and leave early...which has possibilities). IF one mission is completed and not the other mission than the badges from the one mission would disappear from your person by the Hero/Villain Faction running the Missions.

Depending on how many badges you accumulate over the course of your travels would dictate on how Heroic or how Villainous you are (CELEBRITY/MOST WANTED points depending on what side you are on). Accumulate enough points and you might be able to cross over to the other side for certain missions on your own.

2 Children...That's it for us!!

Daughter is 11. Acts like she's 17 already. Dreading the fact that she's starting puberty now if not really soon. Whines uncontrollably. Very smart, great grades, refuses to take a day off from school if she's sick. Purple Belt in Tae Kwon Do (she started at 9). As an extra bonus...she keeps bugging the wife and I to let her play CoH under one of our accounts! I say NO...LOL

Son is 8. Acts like he's 4. Hates school or anything having to do with school. Had a tough year grade wise but picked it up late. Will use any excuse in the book not to go to school. Very athletic, Blue Belt in Tae Kwon Do and taking after the old man by wrestling.

Again, that would definitely be something I would be willing to pay for separate (the cape and the helmets).

NCSoft has done this before. They offered the Justice Armor pieces to be purchased separately.

/em wonders why everyone hates this idea...

We LOVE it! Thank-you for a job well done. Be warned, my SG mates love it too and might be hounding you for some commissions in the future :-)

Looking for: Carrion, Lord Carrion, The Carrion King

Care to try your hand at 2 characters?



Monumental Victory and Mrs. Monumental
He's a MA/INV Scrapper
She's a SS/Fire Tanker
Both have Superjump

If you need any other info or a better pic let me know.

Gratz. Awesome.

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Global: @Eminent Domain
Location: Hamden, CT


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Global: @SimianSyphonics
Location: Milford, CT


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Damn, 2 from CT. I thought I was one of the few/only one from here.

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We are out there... though I am the only person that I can think of that plays. Either I don't have any friends or the ones I have aren't into gaming or comic books.

Global: @Eminent Domain
Gender: Male
Age: 28
Location: Hamden, CT
Height: 5'7 1/2" (Yes that 1/2" counts)
SG Affiliation: None but would like to join one...hint
Most Recognizable Server Character: Eminent Domain
Random Fact: I'm a foosball fanatic. Will play it until my palms bleed.

Are you a conformist?
Do you take pride in big government?

Then the NeoCon Alliance is for you!!!

Name: NeoCon Alliance
Description: Themed "Gov't lackey" VG on Infinity.
Contact: Eminent Domain (lvl 14 SS/Inv Brute)
Recruiting: Any AT

This is my first attempt at recruiting for a SG/VG. I thought I would give it a try. I have no members as of yet. So this would be a VG starting from scratch. Any interest please contact.

Looking to join a VG. Possibly a themed group (corrupt gov't group* see name). Or if I can find other toons who would like to join a themed corrupt gov't VG. "NeoCons" or some other name.

My name is Eminent Domain. I am a Brute, lvl 11 at the moment. I am SS/Inv.

Are those going to be the titles for the Weight Classes or just a generalization? Personally I would like to see more "Heroic" type names for the Weight Classes. Maybe name the Classes after the Signature Heroes whereby the Statesman class would be the highest. Just an idea.