Deebs

[ QUOTE ]
I have asked before with no reply... Am I your cousin, Scarf? @.@

[/ QUOTE ]

:P only if BaS is you father :P

very good lil bro

very nice im becoming a big fan of your style tho she needs pink hair,green scales and a dragons tail to be perfect XD

heee I was wondering when that would come up :P

I am so getting typecasted as someone that draws three eyed characters after I post your pic Xeno .

that will be like 2 three eyed pics in a month then

:P

I love your new avatar Grae

[ QUOTE ]
XD I like the idea of a teeney mushroom cloud.

Kael's neck is really bugging on me :P

The ink really pulls it together. I sooooo wish you would have had Radey flipping someone the bird

[/ QUOTE ]

Okat tiny mushroom cloud is a definite what bugging you on the neck maybe it can be fixed I have a whole jar of whiteout .

no real knowledge of photoshop aside from photomerge thats why you only see pencil and ink pics from me

hmm woul pep be a spanker or a spankee , i'll get to work on that right away :P

[ QUOTE ]
>.> could have just censored it <,< would have been perfect! <@_@> but it works! I like!

Radey's head feels a tad biggish - but its only so noticable <@_@> cool stuff as always Scarf! >.> You won the internet AGAIN

[/ QUOTE ]

drat I shoulda thought of just using a censored bar that woulda been cool !

hmm I was back and fourth on Radeys Head size , im still eh on it .

Penumbra in the first one had a giant melon of a head and had to be fixed

[ QUOTE ]
How is it any more forum friendly if you TELL US that she's supposed to have the middle finger, than if it actually SHOWS "the bird"?

[/ QUOTE ]

The same way that all my pictures start out nekkid but they get posted the forum friendly way "with clothes ....except for rowr and DB who start out with clothes but get posted without "

the fastest way into my heart is via gifts of food ((poor collage students whom refuse to do art for cash thrive on gifts of food ))

Pep is easy tho as pep trades food for spanking pictures of his toon

she was giving the middle finger in an original version , it was changed to make it forum safe

As my search fu is weak

A while back I doodled up a pencil sketch of my two favorite folks to team with on Virtue ,Radey Ayte and Penumbra Edge (played by Starchasm and Arcaine from these boards ) as well as being members in the same SG as me "Teen Squadron"
Pencil Sketch in question

There were a few problems ,such as Penumbras head being too large ((and not just because of his ego )) so I went ahead and fixed a few things as well as did a bit of inking tonight and figured id upload the results for feedback
Radey and Kael ,inks

I think I cut corners with it tho , You know us art folks are our own worst critics

once I catch up on some things Im gonna do a PeP PIC that will knock your shorts off !

nyah nyah and you can't stop me

besides I owe you for that awesometastic Bannanna bread you sent me and chibi

Fugging awesometastic !!

Its a wonderful pic of Virtues beloved nooblet hero but it is now covered in the awesome sauce of color !!!111

Two great tastes that taste great together

suichi whomever did the coloring please please please thank them ...hmmm the heck with it I'll visit your yahoo forums and thank them myself

*leaves a trail of rope tied to the forums *

"Rowr if I tug on this rope pull me back quickly with all your kitty strength! "

Real nice juggs

I did a really sad pep early on and I so need to do an updated one

and thanks for the feedback I'll take a crack at those changes

besides your so like me quake :P rarely getting around to colors and inks :P

[ QUOTE ]
[ QUOTE ]
Each time someone does a render of your character, they become just a little more "real." It's pretty addicting.

[/ QUOTE ]

YES!!! That's it EXACTLY!!

*continues to boggle at the amount of detail Pep puts into the art*

You're never gonna beat Wind at this rate!!

[/ QUOTE ]

thats pretty much How I feel as well

yeah the color adds extra awesome to it

the hair nets my favorite part

I wish it was that easy , unfortunetly all my teachers con purple to me and im a gimpy Student /Part time temp which as you know is a horrid AT .

[ QUOTE ]
oooo, looking right good so far!

And I hope you don't mind, but I'm gonna get a touch nit-picky. I did notice a very minor little problem with his shoulder to the left. The bone and muscle's are a touch off. First, the collarbone should be angled more up. It should be curving to point towards the point where the trapezius meets the deltoid. As is, it looks like his deltoid is swallowing his color bone when, in reality, part of the muscle attaches to it

My Second real anal knit-pick is the small itty bitty bit of shading you have where the deltoid meets the pectoral (still to the left). Maybe lessen the shadow a hair as it interrupts the curve of the pec and deflates it a bit instead of helping to show it all bulging. Just fallow the invisible curve you have set up that goes from his collarbone to the point where the pec meets the deltoid and eliminate any shadow from the deltoid on the pec. side of that invisible curve.

Hopefully that's not as utterly confusing as it sounds... and if it is, never mind... it's a very minor thing on an otherwise supper great drawing... supper supper great!

[/ QUOTE ]

its all pencils all can be fixed , I'll look into it oh guru of goofiness

[ QUOTE ]
Hey don't you have some other work to finish first!

[/ QUOTE ]

pencils are as close to getting finished as I have time for right now due to school .

I always work a piece , show it to get feedback, let it sit for a week while I work on something else and then try to correct anything I over looked .

It works great and helps me fix alot of things I often overlook .

Im quite happy with how your piece turned out Quake even if I thought your character was older , luckily he will grow into the picture
But it will likely be awhile before I ever get around to inking or coloring it as currently school/work takes priority over doodles and in the time it takes me to ink/color Apic I can sketch several

Okies my search fu is weak

This is the original rough posted about a week ago Original rough of Dynamo Man

And after finding some free time I tried to work in alot (not all ) the suggestions you guys came up with Take 2

I think I got all the major issues but wanted to get some feedback before doing clean up and tighter pencils (still have to do his gloves a bit )

As always comments are welcome