BetaBoy

Which program did you use? do you have a link?
i would like to create a website.

Lol thank you guys i will try to improve on my next piece, thanks for the tips.

Thanks for all your support guys, youve really helped my confidence Thanks again.... :/

Here's the back story to my new toon Teen Troll... im new at this sort of thing so dont laugh ok, please.

Beep....Beep....Thomas slowly awakend to the noise of the life support machine beside him, he felt a hand in his, it was his mothers, she sat there asleep on a chair beside him her masscara had run and she held a tissue in the other hand. He pulled his hand out of her hand she was woken she sat upright and glared at him for a few seconds the threw here self at him and held onto him kissing him and saying "why, why" she wept and dried her eyes and put the tissue under her sleave. Tom sat still and wondered why his mother was so upset he moved his arms round her back. He saw his skin was a pale green colour, he recoiled in horror pushing his mum away, he struggled and pushed his way up the bed and grabbed his pillow and hid his body behind it, he buried his face in it and started crying the tears ran down his face he tried to talk but could say nothing that made sense. He turned to meet his reflection in a mirror near the bed he let out a whail, that awoke nearly every old person in the hospital. He didnt understand what had happend he had huge canines that pertruded from his mouth he had green eyes and green skin, he couldnt come too terms with how this happend, he asked his mother. She told him that a week a go he was found lying in a ditch in the hollows by your cousins Beta Boy and Dyna Dude shaking uncontrollably they said the found you with foam around your mouth, they brought you here to Chiron medical centre the closest hospital to where they were at the time. I got the yellow line as soon as i heard, i told you those boys you were hanging around with were dangerous didnt i, she continued wheeping. He slowly come to terms with what he had found out, off course he didnt remember a thing. He had overdosed on supradine, the nurse said that his system couldn't handle the amount he took, he was thrown into a fit and ended up in a coma, she said in normally take time for supradine addicts to mutate but because off the amount and your size it was an almost instant transformation. Tom knew that if he had taken drugs then it was his first time and certainly his last. He had to deal with the effects of the drug which meant, his appearence, size and the abilites it gave him he also found that he had serious outbursts of rage and anger, which no therapist had the answer too. He slowly adapted to the abilites and some how managed to use them to his own will his mother noticed a change in his behavior, not a bad change but a good one, he learned that his fits of anger could be controlled. She did him the biggest favour of his life and signed him up to be a hero so he could use his new found abilities for a good nature, he has said that he has directed his anger twoards the evil in paragon city and will fight side by side with his cousins and their supergroup the Teenage Titans..

I have created a new supergroup, the Teenage Titans this is for teenage heroes only. Im talking about in game teenagers
if u have an alt that u would like in this SG give us a shout. send a tell to Beta Boy or post here and i'll add u too my friends and when your on i'll send u an invite. I play often and there will always be a team or a tf going im sure of it.

Thats some nice writing shimmery

Nice movies, whats up with every one tday u all seem to be annoyed?

i only have three attacks, stone mallet, heavy mallet and stone fists im a brute i need to deal it aswell as take it.
any advice? Im lvl 16 BTW

Im starting a new villain a Stone/Stone brute
i would like get a thing going every wednesday evening 5pm until whenever..... if your intrested add me @Mr. Knockout
add me to Msn aswell if u want mini-chip@hotmail.com c u on wednesday...

just read all of them keep em comin ini

Mr. Knockout pls
lvl 42
Tanker
Blue and white i have stars on me

Ummm i have a few alts all v good builds but im looking to join the spirits of the august lights you know, the RP'rs but i can seem to find any of the leaders my global chat is @Mr. Knockout so pls add me when im in game

Ps: i think i crashed a few of your SG meetings but all in noobish time. long time ago

Hmmm... Mr. Knockout will there because his costume is just so, original and beautifully crafted. I spent so many hours of school thinking about it just hope it gets some where

Nice story beet keep it up!

i was just wondering what the ip was if theres a password if so can sum 1 telll me please ? ty

if theirs any room left and an sk could i tag along with knocky please

Ok so i have played World of Warcraft for just aver a month i have realised that City of Heroes is a god among MMORPG'S
so im comin back to CoH with a new char called Roxanna a stone/stone tanker Mr. Knockout will remain dead until firther notice and i was wondering if i could get an invite into the Armoured Core SG again please! i wont be playing properly till march though so until them bye bye

Brilliant, will there be more? hope so!

Dear god man you can write some master pieces Gratz Doul!!!! on the big 5-0 and what a brilliant way to end it
good luck with blapper and BB

My char name is Mr. Knockout the talented tanker
for those of you who knew me should know how i wouldve like to have died, i would have like to go in a huge fight im swamped in baddies and they just over run me hehe

i have left CoH and i was wonderin if any one of you talented writers would put me in your stories were i die some where in it ?

Ok! this will take along time to read gonna get to it now
"do not disturb sign on the door"

Very well done there!

HEHE lol sum 1 had to do it

Cool on the 29th would be a nice leaving party as i am leaving on the 30th to see what WoW looks like if it ne good i will make my presence known if not im comin back will be there and good luck