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Hey, you're on the road to improvement already!

If the eyes are glowing, I'd reccomend sketching a *very light* glowing effect around each eye. Be careful and light with this, as erasing it could be tricky if you mess up. If you don't want to risk it, it'd probably be better to save the quality of your pic and not start it. Perhaps get a scrap sheet of paper first and practice eyes and their glows before starting on this one?

Also, here's a tip to clean up your pics: If you're opening your pics up in Photoshop after you scan them, go to Edit at the top, then Adjust > Levels. Play around with the three sliders at the bottom, and some of the lighter smudges should disappear with some tweaking. Usually taking the right-most slider and dragging it slightly to the left will do the trick. I use this all the time because I write/draw with a pencil with my knuckles against the paper.

Whenever I'm done with a piece, I'm "Blackhand."

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How do I get this Photoshop? I have Adobe Photoshop Album Creator but it doesn't have any sliders when I pull up the pic. of BAS.

Thnx!

-BAS

I am gonna' attempt one of Aurora Frost's costumes and POSSIBLY Farwielder...I am not very good at drawing armor but I guess I should practice.

Very nice! I love their eyes and their poses!

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alright 2 things
1. Am i required to ask people to let me draw and post pics of their chars?
2.Anyone else want their char drawn? only have Frost, Kerse and DonnchadH left i beleive. would like to do more if anyone wants it.

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Your welcome to draw mine if you like, here's the link!

OK, Back Alley Scrapper v 2.0 is up! Check out the OP for a link! Like always, enjoy!

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I have to say: I'm so glad to see a 12-year-old that can write properly. I'll give your pic a look when I get a chance!


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Lol, thank you...I do try.

Also, you may not want to look at that one because it kid've sucks...I will be posting a *revised* <@.@> version when my brother will let me use the scanner.

Enjoy whatever you do see, though!

Please?

While I am waiting for more feedback to better my character, could someone send me a toon to practice on? I will do my best with it but I am not promising Da Vinci.

P.S. Keep the feedback coming! Every post allows me to improve something!!!

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the picture came out pretty good the only thing I suggest is to align the abs so they can be even. instead of drawing the abs like seperate circles. try drawing a big upside down u but very lightly and then add the circles for the abs

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Thank you for the feedback on the abs! I will start adjusting them pronto! Expect a revised edition by tonight or tomorrow morning!!!

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From looking at it I think

Cons :
the eyes needed pupils
the neck cover lacked detail it looked very blan
eyebrows WHERE are your eyebrows?!?!?!?
guessing your scrapper is shirtless move up the abs some and get rid of that weird boomerang thing on his chest

Pros :
Camo pants look nice
Robotic details were done nicely
shoes were draw nicely

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The eyes don't need pupils cuz he has Glowing Eyes...also, the boomerang thing is this wierd muscle it showed in the screenie but I aggree, I should take that out. And thank you for reminding me bout the eyebrows...D'oh!

Thank you all for the amazing feed back so far, you don't know how much it has helped!

So...any other comments/suggestions/"OMG I HATE IT"s?

Some very interesting shots, there, Ash...

Wow! Really nice TP! It would be awesome if you could do Back Alley Scrapper (You know where to find his screenie) Once again, great work, love the visor!

Im hoping I can trust myself enough to draw his Electric Aura on his fists...right now though, I am sticking to the basics.

Thnx Star!

Can anyone give feedback on the feet please? Also, a way to fix up my lower torso.

Thank you for the feedback! I will get to changing it right away! Also, thank you very much for the head feedback! That is a great idea!

Ok, the more I look at him, the crappier he seems to look...I really need to make him better!

Nice! Flame is really cool...I like how he is drawn more cartoonish!

Well, I think (but don't quote me on this) you can use the name as long as you don't sell your comics. Sorry, that is all I (think I) know. :l

Hello all thou fine artists! This is my picture of Back Alley Scrapper , my hero! Yes, I know his torso stinks and he is kind've fuzzy but, it is just my draft. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! Critique my drawing so I can become better!!! As some of you know I am only 12 and I would like to get better at drawing! Thank you very much and enjoy my humble offering to the vast well of art!

So, ladies and gentlemen, whithout further ado, I give you:

Back Alley Scrapper!!!

UPDATE!!!! Woohoo!
OK, so this is my Back Alley Scrapper v 1.5...or 2.0...which every you prefer!

Enjoy!

Lol..nice!

I was thinking of starting to post art too...Y'know, to represent the 12-year-olds of the CoH community.

Spookie: I really like your drawing so far and I can't wait to see the finished product! Welcome to the Fan Art Boards!!!

Hey Yuuki, I love your art so far!
I wanted to start a collection of art of my characters (no one has ever drawn them!) and I think your art would be a sweet start!
Here is:

Back Alley Scrapper!

and here is:

Cassandra Valentine

I really do hope that you have time for this drawing...and it will be greatly appreciated!

My thanks,
~CuppaBack_Alley~