Those have been coloured by now but I don't have a scanner atm to post them up.
EDIT: Here's a hero I drew for a board awhile back. A dad had wanted tohelp his kid create a comic book and asked the forums for some art. Everyone replied very generously. This was my contribution Flame
Also critques tips are always welcome
Nice! Flame is really cool...I like how he is drawn more cartoonish!
Scarf_Girl�s Official Kid Brother!
Yeah I like how flame turned out and wish I could create a group of characters in that style but i can't seem to reproduce it:S
only thing i noticed was on the Electric Insect his rib cage could be showing a bit by making it form where the armpit ends and then curving into, but not touching, his abs area. other than that i like 'em both!
Anyone else have any feedback for me?
You have a pretty clean style. Keep it up.
Here's another one I did. Doesn't have anything to do with CoX though< other then being a superhero, since I can't make a character that shoots himself and other things out of a Cannon as offense.
Cannon
they look pretty durn "successful" ta me. post more ya silly goose 
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I don't really draw very often since my ability in it seems to come and go. Anyway here are two of the things I've drawn with moderate success.
My main villain, Final Twilight
One of my many hero alts,
The Electric Insect(his one peck is a bit messed up)