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The History of a Hero. The History of Back Alley Scrapper.
The straw under Kyon West stirred as he awoke from his sleep. He rubbed his eyes with his dark hands and stretched his skinny arms. His big, green eyes surveyed the scene around him. His two younger brothers, Tyrel and Daryn still slept in their cots on the other side of the room. Kyon quietly got up and crept outside. The morning air was cool on his face and the dew on the green grass wet his bare feet. A tiny bird fluttered past the window, singing its sweet song into the quiet, resting village.
Okay, wake up you two! Kyon ordered his brothers.
Only a groan and more shuffling straw answered Kyon.
I said up! Come on! Get up you lazy elephants!
But why, brother? It is only morning. I want to go back to bed! retorted Tyrel.
We must start our chores or Father will get angry, responded his older brother.
And, with the mention of angering Father, the two boys quickly got out of bed, and met Kyon in the yard. The hot sun beat on the three boys backs as they picked weeds in front of their hut.
Sweat ran down the three boys foreheads as the picked the last of the weeds and sat down in the shade of a nearby Baobab tree. The trees leaves rustled peacefully above, lulling the three boys into a sound sleep.
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I wanted to get feedback on this before I move on, so more is coming.
Thank you for the advice, in advance!
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:'( That really stinks, Sayt and I'm so sorry to hear that. Best of luck to you with your new hard drive.
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*Gives Rowr backrub but hands are so heavy that I snap her back in half* Meep!
*Calls in Yesmina Glint for Ressurect then Heal Other*
*Calls in Diamond's Ace to do back rub*
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Where's the OP??? I wanna someone to explain this...
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Rox, I believe he/she has stopped reading this because of posts like these:
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and here i thought the most horrid abuse of the english language was in wow...then i read t his thread
seriously, the way the hip-hop 'tards on mtv talk is not the way people talk in real life. and if you talk that way to your friends - i feel really freakin sorry for you
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so, um, when, exactly, is this supposed to get funny?
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May I offer one small suggestion? Stop posting.
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May i offer one small concurment? Please.
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And I thought the art forums was where people could get along. Jeez, give the guy a chance to maybe explain him/herself further before bashing him/her. -
Welcome to the art forums!
I second Star's reccomendation of Graver...His stuff is so cool! Gill Bates and DJ are also very talented!
If you go here, you can get a T-Shirt and a drawing of your character for 25 bucks.
See ya' around!
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Well, writing is a form of art I guess. And I wanna' get some feedback on it so...
The History of a Hero. The History of Back Alley Scrapper.
The straw under Kyon West stirred as he awoke from his sleep. He rubbed his eyes with his dark hands and stretched his skinny arms. His big, green eyes surveyed the scene around him. His two younger brothers, Tyrel and Daryn still slept in their cots on the other side of the room. Kyon quietly got up and crept outside. The morning air was cool on his face and the dew on the green grass wet his bare feet. A tiny bird fluttered past the window, singing its sweet song into the quiet, resting village.
Okay, wake up you two! Kyon ordered his brothers.
Only a groan and more shuffling straw answered Kyon.
I said up! Come on! Get up you lazy elephants!
But why, brother? It is only morning. I want to go back to bed! retorted Tyrel.
We must start our chores or Father will get angry, responded his older brother.
And, with the mention of angering Father, the two boys quickly got out of bed, and met Kyon in the yard. The hot sun beat on the three boys backs as they picked weeds in front of their hut.
Sweat ran down the three boys foreheads as the picked the last of the weeds and sat down in the shade of a nearby Baobab tree. The trees leaves rustled peacefully above, lulling the three boys into a sound sleep.
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I wanted to get feedback on this before I move on, so more is coming.
Thank you for the advice, in advance!
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Well, if you do start taking requests, I'll post a bio of BAS.
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Oo, nice Juggy! Yes, BAS needs one too.
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BAS would like to see his feminine side! O.O
But I was wondering, could I give you a pic of BAS and see if you could make a female counterpart out of it? That would be ze coolioest!
Link in sig. if you wanna' try! ^.^
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@.@ Ooo, everytime it gets better et better! Good job!
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Just an update
I'm still working on your picture BAS no worries, I've run out of inking pens. I'll have to get some new ones before I can continue.
I won't be able to do it this weekend though cause it's Canadian Thanksgiving and I'm going to my parents monday and my girlfriend's parents sunday.
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Well cool!
Have fun man!
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Oui! Have fun and can't wait to see it finished! -
Oh... :*( I only have *counts gallery* 7 things in my gallery including 2 WIPS.
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You can try Zapros, or if you don't mind the character not being from CoH, you can try Derek Fayte... They're both in my sig.
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*sniff*
They make me so proud!
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GASP! Your purple writing rubbed on me! Eek!!!
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[color=#cc99cc]You know we're a patient lot here
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But if you ever wanna say hi feel free! I won't bite! I promise!
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She lies! She lies!!
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Hmm..I googled it but all the sites' links are outdated too
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That is a great great picture...man Brandon should IMHO be still doing the CoH comic...awesome
CB
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Ohh, so that is where I remember that art style from!
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WOW! Gratz WP that is an AWESOME pic!
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God I feel old now!
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that cuz you are
Welcome and greets BaS
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Thank you, Torell!