You would likely get more responses if you:
(a) posted the build instead of just a data chunk -- some people don't have access to Mids when they are reading the forums, and some people want to take a look at a build before bothering to load up Mids to see if it is worth responding. Some people have such different goals in mind than I do that my advice would not be relevant to their goals.
(b) explained what you were trying to accomplish with the build, your playstyle and what your goals are. You mentioned that you want Perma-PA, but is this a team build or solo? Aggressive melee or cautious Ranged? Recharge and utility focused, or Defense focused? Regular utility use, including exemping down, or only Incarnate level stuff?
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What do you guys think? Super expensive but this baby should be badder then the almighty ill/rad. Question, comments, concerns?