Looking for AE arc Feedback "Leave it to Beeber"


DarkGob

 

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Hey folks,

Just finished my first fully thought out Architect Mission arc and I would like some feedback. The arc is hopefully funny and should have plot twists and changes. I put a good number of hours into it, so please be specific and constructive if you think things need changing.

The Arc Id is 535709, "Leave it to Beeber" please rate!

Synopsis:
Isher discovered Beeber on WhoTube, but was not prepared for the damage he would do to the music industry. By the time he realized his flaw, Beeber had become too powerful for him to stop. Beeber and his adoring fans seem hell bent on destroying music. Isher needs your help to track down Beeber and stop him AT ALL COSTS!


Thanx