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The Fall and Rise of Athanatos
ID: 521712

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Synopsis
The battle of Heaven and Hell never sleeps. It has no beginning. It has no end. The clash of Angels and Demons is an unstable balance both sides fight violently to hold. And When Helena, Lieutenant Commander of Heaven's Army, asks you to ascend to Heaven as mortals in the flesh to fight among both combatants and help General Athanatos, you are more than willing to accept. However, it'll start a chain reaction of events that will take you from Heaven to Hell and from now and 2000 years ago. Find out if Athanatos is who he says he is. Do what is necessary.

5 Short Missions. The kind where you can see the end from the beginning.

The story is a fun read. I did what I could with popup dialogues and windows to help the team follow along with the story since only the leader has access to the contact.

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Several AVs/EBs. Not all at once tho, so if you want to solo them, it is very doable.

BREAKDOWN

Assist General Athanatos
Part 1 of 5

• 1 Rescue Ally
• 1 AV/EB

• 1 Rescue Ally
• 2 Heros

• 1 AV/EB

• 3 Destructible Objects
• 1 Rescue Ally
• 1 Release Captive
• 2 AV/EBs

• 1 Rescue Ally
• 3 AV/EBs

Updated

5 very short missions. Custom characters.

The Fall and Rise of Athanatos

His body ached. He felt weak. Tired. Human. Mortal. What had happened? Once, a General at the Incarnate's side, but now cast out. Stripped down to that of a mere man. As Athanatos looked to the sky in search of a presence, he felt empty and lost. He was alone, but his resolve would not be defeated.

Enjoy!

Made some more changes and tweaks.

Thanks @Block-Head for the info!

Added a synopsis to the first post.

Thx @Block-head! Made some changes based off your experience. And then those led to more changes. I'm also glad you liked the length. 5 missions can scare people off. I made them as short as they could be so that you could pretty much see the end from the beginning. Plus, I didn't want the story to be lost in timing in between confrontations. Glad you liked it!

UPDATES

Part 1 of 5

• Changed Wailers (cap lvl 40) to Infernal Demons (cap lvl 54)
• Added several battles to first mission to make it feel more like a battleground.
• Changed Boss to be more of a challenge.

• Fixed Issue with first task not showing up in Navigation Bar
• Attempted to fix spawns. I think it's still pretty random despite the Front, Middle, Back option.
• Couldn't fix Imperious or Daedalos Hero stat. It's a Default. Might increase with +Rep.

• Added Text to better help explain the storyline from Part 2 to 3
• Altered Boss costume to its original
• Fixed spelling error (Devine to Divine)

• Replaced Circle of Thorns with Infernal Demons.
• Fixed Boss Spawn
• Added Bio to Brigg to explain why he has The Family with him.

• Shortened Title to fit in top line.
• Added another surprise to give the plot twist even more flare.
• Changed Exit and final Mission Pop-up. It was too weak and needed more of a final feel to it.

You seem pretty enthusiastic about your arc, I'll have to check it out sometime in the next couple days. You might also want to "/chanjoin MA Arc Finder" in-game and advertise/seek advice from other AE story authors.

Very Excited! Always been 100% for towards what AE was designed for. Definitely join that channel tho! Thanks for the info!

Added a Breakdown to the first post. Hopefully this gives anyone interested in running it what they'll be expecting.