I prefer the term "National Socialist" thank you very much.
Ok, Mr Grammar National Socialist, would you please care to take your mad proof reading skills and run through my arc and send me the corrections? That would be great thanks 
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[color=red]Official Beer Wench of PWNZ[/color] Arc 452196 When Madness Reigns over Reason. Play it and PM me your constructive criticism on what I can tweak before Oct 20th. <3 U all
I just completed the mission where you have to destroy the suitcase. I went up 4 flights to find High Hope. The Nav Box told me to "Lead High Hope to the Chief's desk." after that it said "Lead him to the Chief's desk." The waypoint led me back down the 4 flights to the door. Then I went back up the 4 flights. The chief's computer was a glowie just up the stairs in the boss/hostage room. I didnt need High Hope and the computer was a clickable glowie.
Grammarwise, on the first mission contact conversation, capitalize Hamidon and plauralize chemicals.
Outside of that minor issue, so far seems pretty good. Back to the mission!
So other than the mechanics in Mission 4 (I'll try to change it to a guardable object instead of a clicky everything was ok? Grammar/spelling wise?. One of the Criticisms I got was there were 2 rescues in a row and it just seemed rather..well dumb..so I tried to switch one to an "Escort to, show, ok you can go now" I'll make the map a little smaller too. Maybe even switch it to the PPD precinct if there is one available. Gonna have to look around.
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Ok I totally revamped Mission 4 again, and it makes a little more sense story wise. I also changed the map. So really I won't take offense to you listing glaring grammar/spelling errors. I will not take it as an insult to my intelligence. If I didn't want to know, I wouldn't ask for the help, since I KNOW my grammar/spelling/punctuation has gotten rusty over the 10 + years I've been out of school.
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[color=red]Official Beer Wench of PWNZ[/color] Arc 452196 When Madness Reigns over Reason. Play it and PM me your constructive criticism on what I can tweak before Oct 20th. <3 U all
I congratulate you on grammar/spelling/punctuation lessons and corrections in school; now they appear to be optional extras. Wouldn't dream of correcting pupils in case they are made to feel like failures or prejudiced against regional variations. 
(EDIT: Where I grew up "bus" was known as "buzz", a local town of "Bedworth" was "Bedduth" and "Birmingham" was "Brum". We would have been utterly unintelligible if schools hadn't made an attempt at correct English. )
At the risk of being on topic, I'll play the arc when I get on. Just got back from shopping so tea and shower is on the immediate cards. 
SAVE CoX info:
Titan Network efforts
Saving CoX events/FB info
My MA arc is pretty near completion for Dr. Aeon's challenge. My spelling and grammar aren't the most stellar so I really need someone to go through it and proof read it and see if I missed ANYTHING (Remember the accent is pretty much a given and I use Canadian/British spelling in some words..)
the arc number is 452196
I know about the Cheetah Splice space/lack there of.
I tried my best for the grammar/punctuation, but sometimes when I get carried away with the creative flow, they both suffer.
Thank you so much, and here's a bowl of bacon cookies paid in advance
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[color=red]Official Beer Wench of PWNZ[/color] Arc 452196 When Madness Reigns over Reason. Play it and PM me your constructive criticism on what I can tweak before Oct 20th. <3 U all