I kinda like it. It's simple, and the backstory is... not one I see often.
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Originally Posted by EchoSoKar
I kinda like it. It's simple, and the backstory is... not one I see often.
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I like leaving it simple sometimes, my 50 blasters costume is basically jeans and a t-shirt. Hopefully "not one I see often" doesn't mean "this guy needs to be committed"
I was trying to think up a background for him. It was one of those "Quick make a toon and then think up why he looks like that later." Deals. I have another that I wrote a long background to, but it was on an alt that I never play, years ago. I'll have to find it later and post it as well.
OK so I named the toon Freidkin after the guy that directed The excorsist. I've got a pretty decent background story. I'm pleased with the way the toon looks. Now I need to figure out what to name the minions =/ any suggestions? I'd like to stick with the possession/excorsism theme. Ideas?Comments? Suggestions? Random lullibyes?
You could call the large one Amityville or Poltergeist. Or name the one that does toxic damage after the girl that projectile vomited the green split pea soup.
Also when you asked for what people think of your story are you looking for spelling? (deads should be deeds for example)
Structure and usage? (the repeated use of "they" is redundant) or do you mean the content and how well it reads?
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When I was asking what people thought of it I was just looking to share it and see if people liked it, or if I should scrap it and start over BUT thank you for the spelling and such I'll be sure to go and fix that when I get home |
Originally Posted by ChristopherRobin
You could call the large one Amityville or Poltergeist. Or name the one that does toxic damage after the girl that projectile vomited the green split pea soup.
Also when you asked for what people think of your story are you looking for spelling? (deads should be deeds for example) Structure and usage? (the repeated use of "they" is redundant) or do you mean the content and how well it reads? |
Ok so I broke down and bought the expansion pack (I just needed to try the demon MM) so here is mine (lvl 17)
And here is the background story
"Little Billy was thrilled when he got the job working as an assisstant for the old librarian. It wasn't long before he realised that his boss had ties with the Circle of Thorns. Needing the money to help his family he kept this secret to himself. One night while working late he was spotted peeking in on a ceremony they were preforming. They surrounded him, he was frozen in fear... floating... bright lights... a strange voice... Now poor Billy has the feeling he is never alone. he has black outs, wakes up in strange places, people tell him the things he does not remember doing. They even say during these blackouts his appearance changes. They even go as far to say he grows horns, goes by the name Friedkin, and does horrible deads. Billy is starting to believe their storys from the random places he wakes up and the strange dreams of demons. Billys even more afraid because the black outs are getting longer..."
unfortunetly the back ground is a little long and it's missing the last 6 characters >_< "ger..." I'm curious to know what you all think