*chains Birdy to the desk*
Write moar! 
Great stuff, seriously. Descriptive, characterful...I like it.
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Originally Posted by Zwillinger
GG, I would tell you that "I am killing you with my mind", but I couldn't find an emoticon to properly express my sentiment.
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Originally Posted by Captain_Photon
NOTE: The Incarnate System is basically farming for IOs on a larger scale, and with more obtrusive lore.
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Noooooo! I wanna roleplay!
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You are certainly very good at arranging her plots, it is a very good and well constructed story. And about your other piece, I wasn't criticising it's writing, just that I didn't really understand that it was set in the events leading up to Going Rogue; and that was really because I thought you meant that the scenery, the setting was supposed to imply that, not the fact that you were being rogue-ish. Because as you say, it wasn't really clear that you were a hero, for a start it looked like you had killed your captor to begin with XD
Bad Voodoo by @Beyond Reach. Arc ID #373659. Level 20-24. Mr. Bocor has fallen victim to a group of hooded vigilantes who have been plaguing Port Oakes, interfering with illegal operations and pacifying villain's powers. He demands that revenge is taken on these miscreants and his powers are returned! You look like just the villain for the job. Challenging.
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You are certainly very good at arranging her plots, it is a very good and well constructed story.
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Object lesson.
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link is not working ..(
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Interesting. I checked the link and it's changed. Rather than use that mechanism, I've replaced the link above with an less direct link. It should take you to a page where you can download/open the PDF file.
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Originally Posted by Rock_Powerfist
link is not working ..(
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yaa , link working thanks you ..
Just finished reading it and very nice work, Birdy! I see some interesting plot possibilities for that parasite! 
@FloatingFatMan
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Linked PDF. Some slight use of language, click at your discretion.
Parasite
Enjoy, or not, your choice.
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