Wrong Numbers Short and Sweet (1-3 Mission Arc Reviews)
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Matchstick Women #3369
@Bubbawheat
3 missions
Notes - Lots of fire customs and a couple re-colors, one EB just a notch above standard difficulty, with no defensive powersets.
I'll check up on In Poor Taste shortly, haven't played that one yet.
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Matchstick Women #3369 @Bubbawheat 3 missions Notes - Lots of fire customs and a couple re-colors, one EB just a notch above standard difficulty, with no defensive powersets. |
Story 4.5 stars - I would call this arc a horror/drama with a lot of atmosphere. It was clear, easy to follow and engaging.
Fun Level 4.5 stars - Enjoyable throughout though the healing minions were a little annoying.
Playability 5 stars - No complaints here.
Polish 5 stars - Very polished arc loaded with details pretty much any place you can put them.
Lets up it to 11! My one minor story detraction was finding out the final big bad's background before meeting them. Them revealing it themselves or maybe some more details might be more dramatic.
Overall Rating 4.75 stars - Highly Recommended!
WN
Check out one of my most recent arcs:
457506 - A Very Special Episode - An abandoned TV, a missing kid's TV show host and more
416951 - The Ms. Manners Task Force - More wacky villains, Wannabes. things in poor taste
or one of my other arcs including two 2010 Player's Choice Winners and an2009 Official AE Awards Nominee for Best Original Story
Title: Anger Management: The Trials of a Council General
Arc ID: 286535
Creators Global Name: @Austara
Mission Count: 3
Story From the title I was expecting humor, but that was not the case. Basically, you repeatedly hunt down a council boss that somehow gets away each time you catch him. The motivations assigned to the character playing the arc did not feel right and there were a few too many "give mes" for my taste. 3.0 Stars
Fun Level Reasonably fun, though the last mission was what I call "go make a sandwich". 3.5 Stars
Playability Perfect up till the last mission where I had six bosses "helping" me. I stood back and just watched the last EB get the snot beat out of him. 3.5
Polish Overal nicely polished with nice customs, good bios, interesting dialog and text most any where it could be inserted. I do need to minus .5 a star because all of the customs were in the group "NPCs". 4.5 stars
Overall Rating 3.6 Stars
Lets up it to 11! Separate your NPCs into proper groups, get rid of the silly dancing animation from the Council guarding stuff, the six helpers are way overkill so either remove most of them or make them non-combat or make them Lts., revisit your story and punch it up.
WN
Check out one of my most recent arcs:
457506 - A Very Special Episode - An abandoned TV, a missing kid's TV show host and more
416951 - The Ms. Manners Task Force - More wacky villains, Wannabes. things in poor taste
or one of my other arcs including two 2010 Player's Choice Winners and an2009 Official AE Awards Nominee for Best Original Story
Title: Stealing from the Midnighters
Arc ID: 26496
Creators Global Name: @Blackwolfe
Mission Count: 1
Notes Extreme Elite Bosses
Story This is a one mission arc so as you might expect there is not much story, however the story that is there is good. 4 stars.
Fun Level The diversity of powers and looks of the customs held my interest through the overpowered big bad almost ruined it for me. Had I not been a /dark MM this could have been a mission I could not have finished. 4 Stars.
Playability Does the final boss really need a self heal that will take them from near death to full health? I think not. The last room is loaded with bosses, but they are optional. 3.5 Stars.
Polish I enjoyed all the customs quite a bit and thought their bios were all well written. You contact though still has "Contact Hologram" over her head. 4.5 Stars
Overall Rating 4 stars, but better bring your big guns for this one.
Lets up it to 11! Tone down the Big Bad, give your contact a name and add a souvenir.
WN
Check out one of my most recent arcs:
457506 - A Very Special Episode - An abandoned TV, a missing kid's TV show host and more
416951 - The Ms. Manners Task Force - More wacky villains, Wannabes. things in poor taste
or one of my other arcs including two 2010 Player's Choice Winners and an2009 Official AE Awards Nominee for Best Original Story
Title: Rider's Ribs Restaurant Rescue
Arc ID: 163967
Creators Global Name: @Zamuel
Mission Count: 3
Notes I was intriguingly undecided on whether to submit this here or to the humor arc thread
Title: Rider's Ribs Restaurant Rescue
Arc ID: 163967 Creators Global Name: @Zamuel Mission Count: 3 Notes I was intriguingly undecided on whether to submit this here or to the humor arc thread |
Story It all starts with a restaurant owner's kidnapping and leads you through the trials of a very dysfunctional family. I can understand why the author was unsure as to whether to ask for a review here or in my Ha Ha Hut thread since there are several humorous elements through out the arc. That said, it felt to me like this arc could not decide if it was trying to be humorous or dramatic. The last mission undoes the first two missions which was annoying. 3.5 Stars
Fun Level Reasonable fun throughout and I did not ever feel the dreaded "when will this thing end" that I do with many arcs. 4.5 stars
Playability No big problems here for me, but I am betting some many have problems with the MM boss or the healers in the last mish. 4.0 stars
Polish All the characters had short bios and most characters that could had dialog. The patrols however were missing dialog. 4.0
Overall Rating 4 stars. A decent arc worth playing.
Lets up it to 11! Ok, my feeling is that you should just go for the comedy and drop the drama bits. The funny stuff there is good, just add more! The last mission could use a rewrite since the rehash does not advance the story. There is a great funny arc here just waiting to bust out.
WN
Check out one of my most recent arcs:
457506 - A Very Special Episode - An abandoned TV, a missing kid's TV show host and more
416951 - The Ms. Manners Task Force - More wacky villains, Wannabes. things in poor taste
or one of my other arcs including two 2010 Player's Choice Winners and an2009 Official AE Awards Nominee for Best Original Story
Title: 1000 Miles to... Atlantic City? Arc ID: 310472 Creator’s Global Name: @GabrielNYC Mission Count: 1 Notes – Work In Progress, Extreme EB |
Story – I never expect too much in the way of story from short and sweet missions. The fewer missions in the arc the less story I expect to find. That said, I do at least expect a set up and some framing of the mission I will be playing. This mission is set to "work in progress" so hopefully more will be coming for now however 2 stars.
Fun Level – Reasonable fun for a clear all. 3 stars.
Playability – Everything is playable except for the final EB which was pretty hard and I bet darn near impossible for many characters. Being a NJ based mission I thankfully had brought Miss Jersey (BS/Shield Scrapper) so I was able to handle him. 4 stars.
Polish – There was some great detail in many of bios though a few are still missing. I would like to see more dialog and objectives (maybe a kidnapping?). The contact has no name. A nice start. 3 stars.
Overall Rating – This arc is clearly as it states a "Work in Progress". That being the case I did not rate it in game because I did not want to hurt it's rating. I will gladly replay and rate this arc when it is ready for prime time. For now 3 stars.
Let’s up it to 11! – Expand upon the little contact text that is there and give him some sort of twist to make him interesting. Finish all bios of your customs, the ones there so far are good. Add some dialog to your battles. If it is there (I never heard it), you need to re-balance the fight so it goes on longer. Since your baddies are the Elvis gang I would insert a lot more Elvis references into it. Perhaps rename or give Elvis type nicknames to some customs.
WN
Check out one of my most recent arcs:
457506 - A Very Special Episode - An abandoned TV, a missing kid's TV show host and more
416951 - The Ms. Manners Task Force - More wacky villains, Wannabes. things in poor taste
or one of my other arcs including two 2010 Player's Choice Winners and an2009 Official AE Awards Nominee for Best Original Story
Last call for submissions before I shut this review thread down!
WN
Check out one of my most recent arcs:
457506 - A Very Special Episode - An abandoned TV, a missing kid's TV show host and more
416951 - The Ms. Manners Task Force - More wacky villains, Wannabes. things in poor taste
or one of my other arcs including two 2010 Player's Choice Winners and an2009 Official AE Awards Nominee for Best Original Story
Hmm, how about a not so romantic RomCom? Perhaps a bit to much comedy for this arc but I leave that to your discretion
Love spurned 1934 Can you help out a desperate guy?
Hanging out in Pocket D can become hazardous, you never know when a desperate guy (one of my favorite NPC's over there) spots you and request your help. This was supposed to be your evening of.
Warning, this arc comes with the WORST custom costumes possible. You have been warned, mental health can be in jeopardy here.
And about your arcs, sounds familiar, done that one before. Hmmm got one that does not rign a bell, will give it a try.
Hmm, how about a not so romantic RomCom? Perhaps a bit to much comedy for this arc but I leave that to your discretion
Love spurned 1934 Can you help out a desperate guy? Hanging out in Pocket D can become hazardous, you never know when a desperate guy (one of my favorite NPC's over there) spots you and request your help. This was supposed to be your evening of. Warning, this arc comes with the WORST custom costumes possible. You have been warned, mental health can be in jeopardy here. And about your arcs, sounds familiar, done that one before. Hmmm got one that does not rign a bell, will give it a try. |
If this is a comedy arc please submit it to Wrong Number's Ha Ha hut for a review. Also, next time you are in game please check and see if you have run all four of my arcs.
WN
Check out one of my most recent arcs:
457506 - A Very Special Episode - An abandoned TV, a missing kid's TV show host and more
416951 - The Ms. Manners Task Force - More wacky villains, Wannabes. things in poor taste
or one of my other arcs including two 2010 Player's Choice Winners and an2009 Official AE Awards Nominee for Best Original Story
Title: Old Dog, New Trick Arc ID: 81318 Creators Global Name: Wrong Bird Mission Count: 3 Notes Origin Story, Heroic |
Fun Level It moved along at a good pace and kept me engaged through out. 5 stars.
Playability No real problems here though I prefer consistent levels throughout an arc. 4.5 Stars.
Polish Could have used a few more clues to flesh the story out more, but overall spiffy. This arc had the best souvenir I have gotten from any MA arc. It actually evoked emotion. 4.5 stars
Overall Rating - 4.75 stars highly recommend.
Lets up it to 11! The best thing you can do imo is even out the level range.
WN
Note- In the interest of full disclosure the author of this arc is related to me.
Check out one of my most recent arcs:
457506 - A Very Special Episode - An abandoned TV, a missing kid's TV show host and more
416951 - The Ms. Manners Task Force - More wacky villains, Wannabes. things in poor taste
or one of my other arcs including two 2010 Player's Choice Winners and an2009 Official AE Awards Nominee for Best Original Story
Well it is looking like Wrong Number’s Ha Ha Hut has dried up on reviews so it is time to roll out my other review thread idea. I have always preferred playing shorter arcs and three of my current arcs are three missions and under. So, without further ado…..introducing Wrong Number’s Short and Sweet.
What to expect:
1) Your arc will be graded on the detailed explanation below.
2) When I rate an arc I generally never give less than stars 3 for anyone that makes a real effort even if they fall way short.
3) If you are looking for a long detailed blow by blow review of your arc you will be disappointed if you submit it here. My reviews will be short and sweet . I am in awe of reviewers like PW or MCM who do extremely detailed reviews, but I know myself and I would never be able to maintain that level of review for long.
What you need to do:
1) Play any of my arcs below. Whatever strikes your fancy. Note - If you have already played all of my arcs and it has been more than a month please pick one to replay. I am constantly updating and improving them(hopefully!).
Trademark Infringement (2220)
Death to Disco (84420)
In Poor Taste (259920)
Have a Blap, Blap, Blappy Day Kids! (2019)
2) Send me feedback in game and then post your request in the format below. You do not need to write a review of my arc though if you feel so inclined feel free to comment under the thread for that arc, that would be great.
Eligibility
1) Your submission needs to be between 1-3 missions.
2) No Defeat Alls unless it is a very small map.
3) Humor arcs should still be submitted to Wrong Number’s Ha Ha Hut .
Request Format
Title: (Arcs Name)
Arc ID: (Arc Number)
Creator’s Global Name: (Your Global ID)
Mission Count: (Total number of missions in the arc)
Notes – (Anything special I should know about this arc)
Rating Format and Explanation
Story – Is there a story? Does it make sense? Is it original?
Fun Level – Was it fun? Did I enjoy my time playing it or was I dragging myself through it preying for it to end? Was I engaged?
Playability – Are the characters balanced? Are they level appropriate? Do I have to spend 30 minutes looking for the last glowie?
Polish – Do the customs have bios? Do the big bads have dialog? Are there clues? Does the arc have a souvenir? How do the customs look?
Let’s up it to 11! – My recommendations for improvements.
Overall Rating – Would I recommend it and the arcs final star rating.
WN
Check out one of my most recent arcs:
457506 - A Very Special Episode - An abandoned TV, a missing kid's TV show host and more
416951 - The Ms. Manners Task Force - More wacky villains, Wannabes. things in poor taste
or one of my other arcs including two 2010 Player's Choice Winners and an2009 Official AE Awards Nominee for Best Original Story