[WIP] Lost Research (Testers and Feedback wanted)

Hello there. Let me begin by introducing myself as I am fairly new to the game. I have been here about a month, and this is my first post on these boards.

Right, back to business. I, like many others, are working on a story arc. In order to make it better I would like feedback on it. For this purpose I have published a sample of what I am working on under the name Lost Research (which is also the working name of my arc)

Arc ID: 43501
Name: Lost Research
Creator: @Angeliqa

There is no need to vote, as I am after feedback, and no number of stars can compare to good verbal feedback. Thanks in advance, and may your creativity flow with vigorous power

Welcome to the game and the forum

Once I've collected a few more badges, I'lll start playing through some arcs

Also, if you need any in-game help, you can contact me on my global chat handle @Golden Girl

Good work so far. A nicely thought out plot that keeps you intrigued. I would suggest however that you consider cutting back on the defeat alls; the second is not so bad as it is only a small map (a very apt map for the story btw) but the first is a long defeat all made worse by the fact that its freakshow (their rez is a pain when it comes to this objective) and this may put people off. Also there are quite a few spelling errors, getting someone to proof read or even just checking it out in word first may sort this.

All in all a nice start 4/5, keep it coming I'm interested to see how this one plays out

Thank you for the comment.

Yes, I did have some concerns myself regarding the first missions length. I shall see what I can do to shorten it. 1 thing for sure is to make it a small map instead. Maybe I can also find a shorter/smaller map overall. The Freakshow Id like to keep, but there are options to defeat all. I just need to find one that doesnt make people ghost it in 5 seconds and miss the extras.

I will look for it as soon as possible too. Is there a level range or morality needed for your story?

For feedback, i am afraid my computer somehow crashes whenever i want to write one so i will try to send you a tell instead. And you will have your stars, everyone love stars

you can post the feedback here if I am not ingame or as an ingame mail, I check back regularly

Sorry, I didn't answer your questions.

Its currently made for 20-54, but I am limited in toons to test with, and haven't been able to test it above 40 myself.
It shouldn't be limited in morality, but it makes less sense to play it as a villain.

Edit: Couldn't edit my initial post so I'll add it on here.

I have tested it with:
* Level 40 Empathy/Archer Defender (using 2nd build focused on Archery and self affecting empathy powers)
* Level 21 Spines/Fire Scrapper