I like it, tho her shoulder looks kinda distorted, but cute nonetheless!
Not bad, but she's kinda "floating" without any shadow on the ground, a bit disturbing 
Indeed.
More composition, more lighting and shadows, more realism! Even with the chibi stuff 
Wow!, she must really get through the Kiwi-polish! - good work Ravenswing!.
Something silly...
Chibi-Ni
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