Mini comic - "Wail of the Ban-Sidhe"

This is probably a little rubbish, but here is a first attempt comic for everyone to look at.

It's not really got much story, and it's really just an experiment using comic book creator (Yes, I bought it. Couldn't resist)

I'm sure I'll get flamed, etc... but for those who were interested, I've posted it up.

Be warned... This link will try and open acrobat reader in your browser.

http://cod.aeonworx.com/Comics/Wail_...0Ban-Sidhe.pdf

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Union: @Ban-Sidhe

That was actually pretty cool, well made!

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I like this, really good attempt for your first story. I love your character Ban would like to see more of her story

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Thanks guys.... Much appreciated

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Union: @Ban-Sidhe

Well I would read it but my computer seems to be currently having a hissy fit with the link so I'll try again later

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It's not running away. It's advancing in reverse!

hey that's not bad .... I agree with Captain_Patriot, the character would be good to develop, especially as you've already given a back story

nice work

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Hey, not bad for a first try. It will be a lot better once you expand it more.

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It's not running away. It's advancing in reverse!

Really nice choice of layout and shots, good opening teaser...

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Actually mate I quite like it

And hiya Ban - long time no see

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Hiya Starscreamer Glad everyone seems to like the comic, the comments coming back are very encouraging. Many thanks all.

I'm trying to sort out a longer storyline so I can move things along.

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Union: @Ban-Sidhe