Aw C'mon Guys!
Well it looks sort of Frank Miller-esque but from that one quite abstract looking picture it's really, really hard to judge anything. Perhaps if you did a full page, you could get some more constructive criticism?
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Ummm, Council soldier?, can make out some kind of visor i think. I agree with MorganaFiolett that the reader really needs to see a couple of frames possibly with your character Crocodyle in a larger enviroment to get a feel for the visual style.
I commend you for your proposed idea and enthusiasm, I still have planned a comic strip myself....finding the time is another thing as always. 
What they say over at Megatokyo, and rightly so, is: if you're starting a new comic, good for you! If you're looking for C&C on it, don't show us just one page (or one panel), show us 3 to 4 full pages (some opening page in comics can be just one full-paged illustration).
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What they say over at Megatokyo, and rightly so, is: if you're starting a new comic, good for you! If you're looking for C&C on it, don't show us just one page (or one panel), show us 3 to 4 full pages (some opening page in comics can be just one full-paged illustration).
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Also, wow, someone else who looks at Megatokyo.
Hard to tell what villain it is, thinking what enemy uses those shoulder pads.
It's not running away. It's advancing in reverse!
Haven't posted there in yonks... them MT people scare me!
Hi everyone. I've decided to do a short comic strip of the origins of my villain Crocodyle and I want your opinions on the style that I have chosen. It's a very Noir type look that I am gunning for and I want to know if I am pulling it off. Please tell me what you think:
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Now the next bit is easy. What type of Enemy is slumped at the bottom there? A biscuit for anyone who guesses the correct answer!