Captain Patriot #1


Crimson_Archer_EU

 

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At last after 6 months I finally got around to finishing Issue #1.

Captain Patriot is sent on a covert mission by statesman into Rogue Isles to sabotage a new weapon of Arachnos.

Captain Patriot #1 - Operation: Fort Darwin

I would love to know what you think? All feedback welcome good or bad

Issue #0 is now available on my site along with Vixen Girl. A long time friend of Captain Patriot.


 

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Nice one. I love it. Thanks for your effort and sharing it with us.

Keep up good work.


 

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Yeah I like reading your comics, very well done.

We should do a DragonBane/Captain Patriot crossover issue.


 

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Loved it!!

Does he need a sidekick?!


Formerly @Crimson Archer, now @CA
The Militia - Protecting Paragon City through roleplaying since June 2006!

 

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Statesman would brief you on their capabilities... not debrief you


 

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the comics is real good i like it can't wait till issue 2


 

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Really like it Captain, congrats on a great issue! Everyone should read it!


 

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Very nice, good layout and use of comicy effects, like the splosions and text.

However two spelling mistakes.
Hault should be Halt and you misspelt trouble.


It's not running away. It's advancing in reverse!

 

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Thanks everyone. Glad you enjoyed it.

Also thanks for pointing out some of the mistakes I've made, I'll go in and amended these. I couldn't think of better editors I'd rather have.

Dragon, would love to catch up and go over some idea's if you want. Just read your comic on Dragonbane as well, it was fantastic (thanks for the mini Cap Patriot ref in there), it's given me an idea on a possible crossover story.

Hoping to get a least one issue out a month


 

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Yeah definatly, that sounds great!

I havnt seen you online since I got back though, when do you usually play nowadays?