OT: Jedi pic


Avernal_EU

 

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Wasn't sure whether to post this really, but anyway.

Zerynta Tal

I made this as part of a 'Create your own Star Wars character' comp.


Comments/Criticism always welcome


 

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Nice texture look on the boots and face.
I love that light saber tough.

2 points in my opinon:
*The picture resolution: jagged lineart makes kittens cry
*Character pose a little stiff
Seriouly good stuff all round.

Is it me or are you getting much better at this? ^^
Keep 'em coming...


 

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Nice texture look on the boots and face.
I love that light saber tough.

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Thank you

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2 points in my opinon:
*The picture resolution: jagged lineart makes kittens cry
*Character pose a little stiff
Seriouly good stuff all round.

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Noooo the kittens again! Comment noted, agreed. I wish I'd saved it before I converted it into a *.jpeg, I could have saved it by adjusting the lineart opacity!! I'll have go around the all the lineart now to sort this. Anyway comment appreciated

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Is it me or are you getting much better at this? ^^
Keep 'em coming...

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I hope I am ^^


 

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Nice texture look on the boots and face.
I love that light saber tough.

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Thank you

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2 points in my opinon:
*The picture resolution: jagged lineart makes kittens cry
*Character pose a little stiff
Seriouly good stuff all round.

[/ QUOTE ]

Noooo the kittens again! Comment noted, agreed. I wish I'd saved it before I converted it into a *.jpeg, I could have saved it by adjusting the lineart opacity!! I'll have go around the all the lineart now to sort this. Anyway comment appreciated

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Is it me or are you getting much better at this? ^^
Keep 'em coming...

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I hope I am ^^

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I think you are and I'll even add you to my DA watch so I can keep track


 

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I like it, although lose the hat, and have flowing hair instead

Mara Jade anyone :P


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I like it, although lose the hat, and have flowing hair instead

Mara Jade anyone :P

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Mara Jade ftw!


 

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Thanks for that, I'm having a break from posting my art, lots of work to catch up on! Hopefully get back to it asap.


 

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It's a very good piece, there's something a little off about the perspective of her left arm though, I think that is probably what is to blame for the "stiff" appearance mentioned. Anti-aliasing on the lineart would've made it a lot stronger a piece too.


 

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It's a very good piece, there's something a little off about the perspective of her left arm though, I think that is probably what is to blame for the "stiff" appearance mentioned. Anti-aliasing on the lineart would've made it a lot stronger a piece too.

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Thanks I can see your point, although I don't really know how to change this now (i've flattened the file into a .jpg to save space!). I am completely new to computer art, most of my previous work was done manually, mostly landscapes. I'm sure I'll figure out how to get these programmes to work with me rather than against me eventually.


 

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Think it's very nice, but it's a rather unnatural position. Personally, I don't like the contrast of texture with the face.

And, Jedis/Siths don't use guns