I like it, I'm guessing you're a magic origin? Anyway just thought I'd point out 'Acursed' is actually spelt 'Accursed' but who cares it was good.
thanks for the comment(and the spelling error). I'm also making a family of twilights to suit the theme. 
EDITED: oohoo, lvl 37, hope to advance soon.
Oh come on guys, I would like some feedback please, 70+ views and only 1 reply pisses me off a bit. Come on guys, lay it on me. 
OK, I'm not all that creative with storylines and origins, but I just thought that I would post my storyline for my main. First of all I will post some quick info on this toon then post the storyline.
Info
Name: Mr. Twilight
Archetype: Corruptor
Primary power set: Dark blast
Secondary power set: Dark miasma
Level: 35 ( hoping to get to 40 by i7)
Origin: Magic
Storyline
As a demon spawn, Mr. Twilight constantly honed his skills in the darkest regions of the netherworld, he had the time of his life learning new powers and tormenting the souls of hell, he even had a family with the demoness known as Tresparciel. But one day all that ended when he was summoned by the acursed circle of thorns. He guarded the thorn tree for years on end slowly losing both his powers and his sanity. Fortunately however while guarding the thorn tree one day a massive mob of supervillains known as the Violators raided the thorn tree, killing all mages and stealing the thorn tree's pwoers. Thus, releasing Mr. Twilight from the circle of thorn's control. In return he pledges his loyalty as an eternal servant of the violators. Now Mr. Twilight is more powerful than ever, and is growing even more powerful, one victim at a time.
Your questions and criticism are all appreciated, thank you.