Daybreak Patrol
Heyo team...some random thoughts
First many thanks to everyone wishing me a happy B-day couldn't think of a better way then hanging with The Daybreaker's.
Second in case I forgot to do so Caemgen,Thank you for setting this up and getting the wheels rollin not a bad first outing at all.
Officer J. Justice great job being the Dayleader (team leader) you kept us pointed in the right direction with it being are first time together could of been a mass confusing mess,it wasn't WELL DONE!
To all the other member's of the Unit,Great job gang!!
Ok as far as speed of lvl's lets remember 1-5 was sewers which will always be pretty fast but then 6-8 ish was abit slower as we ran Radio's and some member's drop out.
Also as we get higher in lvls we will deffently slow down.I too like to take breaks after every so many missions,bio,COFFEE! whatnot, might be a good idea for who ever is Day leader when we are moving a long distance to next miss or there is that small lull to call a quick 5-10 minute break for everyone to breathe :P
Diffaculty setting I am meh,I want to do as many arcs with TF's thrown in as possible but I will of course go along with whatever the Unit decides. (Lubs Merits and badges!)
I think on Thursday we should hit are contacts or just get ourselves to the Hollow's talk to Wincott.Hollow arc's is a decent time even if we arrest FF for the Millionth time. :P
I too will pass on Vent only because I would hate to kill the voices in my head..err..umm what I think are voices sound like in the Armors,yeah thats it.
I do have Leadership pool in my build so its all Jake on this end.
Zeta make whatever you will love to play to 50 within the Unit I say be happy! Also if you need some help lvling send me a Pm we can meet up I have some low lvl toons I could jump on and help out
That's 11am on the east coast, so I may not make it. I was beginning to lag before the servers crashed on Tuesday so I'll have to have a couple of extra cups of coffee to stay awake with you guys.
Re-schedule for tomorrow perhaps?
I could do tommorow, not sure of the majority...
Ah well, if you're bored you can always read what I did when bored at work last night...
Daybreaker Alpha slipped into an alley and tapped the proper sequence of keys on his left gauntlet to trigger the teleportation protocols built into his powered armor. A signal was sent to the apartment Crey Corp had provided him and that signal triggered the teleport equipment which took up the entire spare bedroom to lock on to his location and recall him home. Its range was limited to just under a quarter mile but it was enough to save him from having to walk in and out of his apartment building in his armor. His identity wasnt secret as such but he saw no reason to alarm his neighbors or to invite criminals to his home.
His exoskeleton froze for a good thirty to forty seconds as power was shunted from the armors strength and defensive systems and into the teleportation cycle. At these times right before teleportation Calvin Michaels felt trapped inside the suit and acutely vulnerable since he was for all intents and purposes just standing inside a metal can. This was just yet another reason this system was useless in the field but despite his complaints Crey Corp insisted on including it in the Daybreaker Armor but assured him thats its range would be increased and the power issues solved as they garnered more and more data from the suits actual usage.
Finally a calm white light surrounded the exoskeleton, pulsed momentarily and then flared into a blinding mega-wattage before abruptly ceasing altogether and leaving Calvin in his spare bedroom surrounded by computers, docking stations and Lord only knew what else.
Once more Calvin Michaels tapped a sequence into the keys on his left gauntlet and this time his armor started powering down leaving just enough active juice to assist the wearer in the removal of the suit. Calvin began by taking off the bulky gauntlets as the other connectors required a finer touch to remove than the metal gloves would allow. Once those were removed he disabled the magnetic locks which held his helmet in place and after carefully unplugging the neural wires which connected his own mind to the suits neural etchings and BCI, he pulled the helmet off, sucking in a breath of real, true, actual, non-filtered air.
Calvin ran his hands over his brow and face sluicing off the layer of sweat and grit which had formed over the course of the day. Need to talk to them again about some air conditioning, he reminded himself. Hot as hell in there and whatever this metal is it sure doesnt breathe enough for the sweat to dissipate. Felt like chunked tuna sitting around in a can of my own juices
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Disconnecting from and removing the rest of the powered armor, Calvin debated what he needed more; a shower or a beer. By the time each piece of armor war wiped down and slotted into its individual docking bay (for recharging and data collection) the decision had been made and Calvin headed for the fridge as he started removing the electro-textile body suit which was the data transfer medium between his body and the bulk of the suits systems. The Brain Computer Interface handled everything from data analysis to communications, sensors (external and internal) to systems power over-rides and even limited control over the nanites (which still freaked Calvin out) but the electro-textile body suit allowed the more mechanical systems to respond in complete harmony with Calvins movements and reflexes without even the milliseconds of delay that processing them through a computer would cause.
Bodysuit hanging open, Calvin leaned into the opened fridge and took a moment to enjoy the cooled air flowing across his body before reaching in and grabbing the plastic ring which held his last two beers together. Might as well celebrate a successful first day, he thought, closing the fridge and walking over to slump down into his recliner.
They seemed like a good group, he thought thinking about the rest of the Daybreaker Patrol. One had been late, one had departed early and one had been a complete no-show altogether but he wrote those problems off to mechanical issues, these Powered Armors were all prototypes after all. Working his way through the first beer he wondered briefly if he would be able to keep up with the rest of the crew: The first day had been a rush but had also been hectic as hell. And the others seemed so young but far more experienced at this sort of thing. Still, it was hard to tell much through the armor they all wore and he suspected they all had doubts and concerns about how it would all work out.
Before meeting them all Calvin had assumed theyd all basically be test pilots of the armor they wore, deputized by the PPD merely to allow them to put the suits through their paces in under true field conditions so that a determination could be made on which was most practical for use by PPDs Powered Armor Division. He was still pretty sure this was the case with Daybreakers Gamma, Zeta and Omega but he wondered if perhaps Officer Kirby, Tac-Officer Hoplight (Hoppy, he reminded himself) and Officer J. Justice didnt perhaps have actual policing experience. They hadnt had much time for social interactions but he imagined hed find out more about them as the days and weeks went by.
Officer Justice definitely seemed like she knew what she was doing, he thought recalling how she had taken leadership of the group for the day and had really run them at breakneck pace. First order of the day had been to help out the PPD in getting control of a contaminated neighborhood. Apparently some addicts had broken into a Crey facility and stolen whatever drugs they could find
And they found the wrong thing. Soon addicts across the area had increased strength, glowing eyes and a very violent attitude. The Daybreakers, under Officer Justices lead, had done themselves proud, subduing and containing well over a hundred of the poor lost souls and had even rescued Flower Knight who had gotten in a bit over her head when she tried to find documentation on the strange mutagen that had affected the addicts.
Shes a bit of a spitfire, that one, Calvin thought. She paused maybe a minute to accept the Isolator Badge they wanted to give us in thanks for our service before running us off towards our next task.
I wonder what she looks like out of that suit
But as soon as the thought crossed his mind he dismissed it. They were here to do a job, damnit. Besides, he refused to think of any woman except Wendy who he still considered his fiancé. Until Malfearance could be brought to justice there would be no other passion in his life. Period.
After helping out with the contaminated of the Hot Zone, Officer Justice had led the Daybreakers into the sewers. It was
gross. The fetid water they had to traipse through, the slime oozing down the walls, the fact that people actually congregated down there all had mad Calvin want to loose his lunch.
And those zombie like creatures, what the hell was up with that? He thought with a shudder.
Immediately after their tour of the sewers Justice had pushed them on to yet another mission and another. Somewhere in all the chaos and fighting Calvin had lost track of who he was even fighting and why. Justice just had to point out the villains, he already trusted her enough that he ran in and started knocking heads regardless of what they called themselves or how many of them there were.
He may not be able to put name to face yet (or even name to Powered Armor) but he already knew these people had his back when it counted, they had proven that time and again already. In a very real sense they were all working against each other: They were all there to showcase and demonstrate their individual prototype armor. When push came to shove though they all had really come together as a team.
Calvin felt a sense of pride rising up within him over what they had done and how they had worked so well together but rather than allow it to bask over him and enjoy it he forced it back down with a grimace and the chugging of his last beer. The rest of them were all the for the right reasons, be it to do the work of a cop or just to help better arm and protect cops, they were all there to do right. Calvin, on the other hand, was there for revenge. Once he was skilled enough with the armor, and once he figured out a way to slip it past Creys watching eyes, he was going after Malfearance. That was why he had joined the Daybreak Patrol. That was why he put up with Crey Corp, ignoring his dark suspicions about what they did in general and to him specifically.
Calvin Michaels had put his life on hold for twenty years after Malfearance had slaughtered Wendy and crippled him as they shopped for an engagement ring
But the dark light of revenge was starting to be visible at the end of the tunnel
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With a grunt, Calvin pushed himself up off of the recliner and headed into the bathroom. Stripping out of his electro-textile body stocking he set it to soak in the sink and started the water running for his shower. Before stepping under the water and washing off the grit his drying sweat had left him caked with he paused to examine himself in the full length mirror.
The first things to jump out at him, as always, were the skeletal robotic arm and leg on his right side. When Malfearance had attacked the mall outside of Buffalo, New York Calvin and his fiancé Wendy had been shopping in the ghoul had used his foul magic to attack indiscriminately. One blast of what research had revealed to be some kind of dark, netherworld energy had decimated the jewelry store the couple had been shopping in, killing her and leaving Calvin all but dead. For some reason Crey Corp. had sent a team of researchers, medics and scientists to try and save his life.
They made me a monster, Clayton thought for the millionth time. Robotic arm and leg, metal ribs, cochlear and retinal implants, reinforcement of my spine and internal organs changed in ways I dont even fully understand
Im a modern day Frankensteins Monster.
He didnt have to look monstrous. Crey Corp. had provided him with flesh looking sleeves for his arm and leg padded to hide their robotic nature. Under clothes or out of direct sunlight they could just about pass for natural except for being a bit too smooth if touched. The false eye they had given him could pass almost any test when he had it in, moving in synch with the real one just like a normal eye would. In darkness there was the occasional shine, kind of a cross between the sheen sometimes seen in an animals eyes or redeye in a badly taken photograph but it did have its benefits as well. The only other outward sign of his cyborg-ness was the two jacks behind his ear lobes into which the neural wires jacked into but Calvin didnt think hed let anyone get close enough to see those except for Crey technical personnel.
Clayton didnt wear the cover ups while in the Powered Armor because the suit was designed to plug into the preexisting modifications. They didnt get much wear while he was at home either for Cal liked the constant reminder of what had become of him, liked how it kept him focused on his real agenda.
Running his skeletal hand through his short black (starting to go grey in a worrying strip just off center of the top of his head) hair and then over his stubbled jaw, Clayton tried to push all thoughts away so that he could enjoy his shower. His foot stopped before reaching the bottom of the tub. His augmented hearing had picked up the sound of the front door of his apartment opening even over the sound of the running water.
Mr. Michaels, a male voice said from the front room.
Dont you guys knock? Clayton asked, walking out of the bathroom. He had considered grabbing a towel to cover himself with but quickly decided not to bother. These guys were intruding on him, too damn bad if they felt uncomfortable. As or himself, Clayton had lost his inhibitions around scientists, researches and other medical personal due to the years of treatments hed been through which required far more indignities than mere nakedness.
No, Mr. Michaels. We do not knock, this from one of Crey Corps ubiquitous Field Agents. Two of them stood inside his still open front door. Black suit, tie and shoes, white shirt, dark glasses and a radio wire running out of their ear, Crey Field Agents looked every bit stereotypical Men in Black which had been the subject of many conspiracy theories before the Rikti War. These days Clayton suspect far more of those theories were true than he had ever before suspected.
We most assuredly do not knock when the apartment and everything inside it belongs to us, the Field Agent continued.
I dont belong to you, I just work for you, Clayton pointed out with a distinct lack of impression upon either agent.
As you will. With that each of the Field Agents took a step away from each other and through the front door more people walked. The first two through the door were a Crey Corp Scientist and Researcher both wearing the rubberized looking protective laboratory gear which hid any trace of their identity and, Clayton often thought, humanity. Through those long, heavy lab coats, the thick protective gloves, the head and face protection and goggles it was impossible to tell even the gender of these Crey employees unless they spoke.
These two walked past Clayton with barely a glance and headed right to the spare bedroom and the Powered Armor stored within it. Right behind them into the apartment came a Medic and a Geneticist wearing almost identical gear as the first two. Behind them came a female Field Agent and Clayton started wishing he had grabbed a towel after all.
The Medic immediately approached Clayton and jacked some kind of medical device into the port behind Claytons left earlobe. The Geneticist very proficiently and very impersonally proceeded to first take skin samples, blood samples, hair samples and then running them through some kind of portable analysis device.
Make yourself at home, Clayton said with obvious annoyance. Hed been through this hundreds of times by now but it seemed much more oppressive now since they had come and intruded upon his apartment rather than him reporting to a Crey Corp medical facility.
You have been drinking, a voice said from behind him. Clayton couldnt tell if it was the Medic or the Researcher as they were both behind him while he eyeballed the Field Agents who sedately stared right back at him.
Two beers, Clayton answered. Its nothing.
Test subject shall refrain from consumption of any substance which could affect their physical or mental state post interface with the RHP Battle Armor Prototype, codenamed Daybreaker Alpha Suit 1 for these trials, and pre examination by Crey Corporation medical, scientific, research or other personnel designated by Crey Corporation to conduct such examinations as they see fit.
Youre quoting my damn contract now? Clayton asked, turning his head to glance behind him. It was too damn beers and I was thirsty. That tin can you have me interfacing with is hotter than hell. I was soaked in sweat by the time I got out of it.
Consumption of water or juice would be acceptable. Alcoholic beverages are forbidden. Also to be avoided are drinks with a high caffeine content, the voice replied.
Youre written report and personal observations were due for submission five minutes ago. Did they include your complaint about the internal temperature of the RHP Battle Armor Prototype in your submission? the other one behind him asked, Clayton thought it was the Medic.
I havent written the damn thing yet, Clayton snarled back.
It was due five minutes ago. It is late. What caused the delay?
I was whacking off, what do ya think? snapped back without thinking and immediately regretted it. Clayton paused for a moment and took a deep breath. These people had a way of pouring rubbing alcohol on any loose nerve he had but he needed to stay in their good graces. I had the two beers and relaxed for a little while. My plan was to gather my thoughts and observations while I showered.
Noted. Complete report immediately upon completion of our exams.
Sure. Fine, Clayton answered. And do you have to stare? This last was said as he turned to look directly at the female Field Agent. Hed been referring to his missing eye, arm and leg rather than his nudity, having man parts exposed was one thing but he was suddenly finding it hard to be exposed as just half a man in front of this agent. Without his fake skin sleeves covering his arm and leg and without his fake eye in he was beginning to feel very exposed indeed.
The female Field Agent, a redhead with a slightly upturned button nose but unremarkable from any other Crey female Field Agent in terms of style, tipped her glasses down and let her eyes roam over Clayton for a long moment before setting them back to rights. Besides that his comment got no response.
A long moment of silence passed as the Crey employees continued to poke and prod at Clayton, The two Scientists form the spare room left and returned with unlabelled boxes and the Field Agents stood by impassively. After a series of injections Clayton asked just what they were shooting him up with.
Its not steroids, is it? I dont want my balls shrinking up or anything. Ive got a few parts of me that work as good as ever and Id like to keep it that way.
The injections keep you from rejecting your various implants as well as keep your body performing at peak performance.
You hear that? Clayton asked the female Field Agent. Peak performance! Ok, no information out of the eggheads but at least that got her to smirk, he thought to himself.
Now the Scientists had gathered in the front room, apparently finished with up and/or downloading data to his armor and replacing whatever parts they saw fit.
Your report is late. It is to be completed and transmitted immediately, one of the scientists advised him.
Yeah, we went over that already, Clayton answered.
Are there immediate observations you would like to provide before completing your detailed report?
Um, yeah. I suppose, Clayton said and ran over things in his head. Like I mentioned to your friends here, the suit is hot inside after its been running for a while. You need to install some air conditioning or something or Ill be drowning in my own sweat.
Subjects comfort is not a priority but will be considered in future upgrades.
Its not just comfort if I pass out from dehydration or heatstroke.
The RHP Battle Armor Prototype carrying designation Daybreaker Alpha Suit 1 monitors pilots physical condition and would shut down before such conditions could occur.
Shutting down could be even worse than passing out in the wrong situation Clayton replied.
Concern is noted and should be outlined in your upcoming report. Are there other observations? the Scientist asked while making a notation on his PDA.
Generally the armor worked great. In battle, some punches seemed to have less force behind them than others though. There was a bit of chafing under my arms and the protective mesh around my neck pinched a bit. The speed boost while running is a blast but will take some getting used to but I think thats my issue not yours. The computerized tracking had a tendency to pick out targets which were too far away for immediate attack; it would help if it could be restricted to targets within arms reach. Clay paused for a minute to consider what else he planned on including in his report. Oh yeah, like I said the speed running is a blast but it would be nice if I had an even faster way to get from one area to another. Would it be possible to extend the range of the transporter?
The scientist completed punching his notes into his data pad before returning his eyes to Clayton and responding. Pilot should attempt to restrict their physical attacks to preprogrammed optimum tactics. Weve uploaded a patch to include a two fisted overhand strike to your prior optimum tactics. These tactics are both programmed and hardwired into the RHP Battle Armor Prototype, codenamed Daybreaker Alpha Suit 1 and will result in the maximum force possible.
A temporary jet pack has been installed to facilitate quicker travel. It is of older and inferior design but was already compatible. Pilot can expect it wear out if put under constant strain. Use should be prohibited to emergency situations until upgrade is available. Teleportation will continue to be limited and plans for range expansion on this project are not approved.
Fine, fine
But what about the pinching and chafing? Clayton asked.
Minor adjustments of fit should be no problem at all. All needed adjustments should be detailed in your report and new measurements can be taken for adjustments sake.
Great! I could use more room in the crotch as well, Clayton said, again glancing at the female Field Agent. No reaction. She must really have her game face on, Clayton thought. Or
Maybe Im just not that funny
Were done here, the Scientist said and the Crey employees immediately grabbed up the last of there things and started departing. The two male Field Agents were first out the door, followed by the gaggle of brainiac types. Second last out the door, the one Scientist sternly reminded Clayton that his report was overdue and expected immediately, then quickly departed.
The female Field Agent was last to depart. She paused at the door to the hallway and turned back to look Clayton over once more. Does it have variable speeds? she asked.
Before Clayton could even think of a response she shrugged and walked out the door.
Report finally typed up, encrypted, emailed to his handlers and shower finally taken, Clayton called to have a pizza delivered and then wandered into the spare room to examine his armor. He could see that a few wires had been replaced and the neural etchings looked cleaner but they were too fine to tell if any adjustments had been made, otherwise it looked exactly the same. They had mentioned at least one programming upgrade, the two fisted overhand attack, and Clayton prepared to put the armor on knowing that any relevant programming upgrades would be revealed once he jacked the neural wires in behind his ears. Before he could plug in, however, he spotted a box sitting besides the door.
It was unlabeled just as all those the Crey scientists had carried in and out had been. Hesitantly, Clayton set the box upon a table and opened it. There was nothing shocking inside merely a few spare parts; two extra electro-textile bodysuits, several neural wires, and various and sundry other small parts which Clayton didnt know the names of but knew how to install.
Clayton sat in a chair and stared at the box. The contents were each in their own individually sealed plastic bag with a sticker carrying the Crey Corporation logo and a barcode.
They cant be spare parts deliberately left for me, Clayton thought to himself. Most of whats in there isnt whats likely to break or suffer wear and tear. That would most likely happen to various parts of the outer shell first, probably the joint casings or some of the inner moving parts.
Did they just forget it? Was it some kind of test? Clayton considered the opportunity for what seemed like ages but he actually came to his decision rather quickly. Crey kept a very close eye on everything, especially inventory. The individual barcodes were some small proof of that. It was too early to give them any suspicions. Grabbing up his cell phone, Clayton used the speed dial to contact his handlers and advise them that a box was left behind during the earlier examinations. He was brusquely told that someone would be dispatched to collect the box and its contents and then hung up on.
Later, opening the door, Clayton was surprised to find that the female Field Agent from earlier had gotten there even before his pizza did. She had even knocked.
I wasnt expecting you, he said stepping back and indicating that she should come in.
I can tell. Youre wearing pants, she answered and strode in to the center of the room.
Um, yeah. Err, sorry about earlier, Clayton said closing the door and sticking his hands into his jeans pockets. It can be frustrating when they all swarm around like that and treat me like a science project. Sometimes I just feel the need to push back a little, you know?
The Field Agent made no response, just stood there staring at him from behind her dark glasses.
Yeah, anyway. I shouldnt have targeted you. Its the others who do the poking and the prodding. You were just doing your job, right?
My job? she asked.
Protecting the brain surgeons, Clayton answered. Thats why theyre always surrounded by you scary types, right?
Protecting them, she said and her head tilted just a bit to the left. That is one way of putting it.
Clayton was finding this who exchange a bit off putting. Perhaps it was just because hed never exchange more than a few words with a Field Agent before but he just didnt seem able to find his conversational balance here.
Well, ok. Let me grab that box for you, he said before turning the words into action. Would you like me to carry it downstairs for you? Its not really heavy but I wouldnt mind.
Thats not necessary. Do I need to inventory the contents?
Feel free, Clayton said setting the box on a table near her. I thought about snagging one of the body stockings so I didnt have to wash mine each and every time I took the armor off but figured itd be best to just request one through proper channels. The rest is just spare odds and ends. May be handy to have around for do it myself repairs but if Crey insists I wait for them why should I complain?
I dont think you making self repairs is the concern, she said. Crey products tend to fetch high prices on the black market.
Ah. Hadnt really thought about that. That kind of stuff really isnt my thing.
No? the female Field Agent asked. But body stockings are?
Oh, heh, Clayton sputtered a bit and could feel himself blush a bit. Theyre required to pilot the suit is all. They transmit date from me to it and vice versa.
Isnt it odd? she asked as she picked up the box, not bothering to have inventoried it. Being connected to a computer like that? To a machine.
Ive been connected to machines and computers for almost twenty years now, Clayton said, lifting his right arm and flexing his robotic arm and opening and closing his robotic fingers. But yes
It is odd. Sometimes I hate it but I always need it.
A silence fell between them and Clayton felt himself feeling even weirder than before. This was almost like having a real conversation with a Crey Corporation employee.
Is it cold? she asked, finally breaking the silence.
What? he asked, feeling as if hed lost the track of the conversation.
Youre err
bionics, she said. Id imagined that they would be cold.
Rather than answer, Clayton stepped a bit closer and held his right hand out to her. She stared at it for a few moments but then finally shifted the box to one arm and reached out and took his hand. It was a bit cold, she noted. Colder than flesh anyway. But even in that short time in which she held hands with him she noticed the robotic fingers warmed up to match her own temperature.
Slowly letting go of his hand, the Field Agent walked to the door and opened it. Clayton watching her the whole way.
I cant picture you in a body stocking, she said from the doorway, her back still to Clayton.
Have you tried to? he asked, not entirely sure what he meant.
She half turned to look at him. Without replying, she reached into the box and then tossed him the package she had taken out.
It wont be any trouble for you? Clayton asked catching it smoothly in his robotic hand, his retinal implants having perfectly tracked its trajectory.
I can take care of myself, she answered and walked out the door.
Clayton stared at the door for a long time after she left, thoughts racing through his head far too quickly for him to catch. Truthfully, he didnt try too hard. The thoughts were all questions Questions he didnt have the answers to. He knew hed eventually have to sort through the questions and figured out which ones he did want answered and how to go about getting them but for now he was content just to stare at the door until the pizza delivery guy rang his bell and knocked him out of his reverie.
Friday's ok with me.
Friday is fine w/ me too.... *yawn*
Ok, at least half the team is down with friday for this week so we'll resume then. If the others cannot make it we'll advise how far we got up level wise and they can either catch up on their own, with help of whoever is available, or we'll help them along Tuesday...
By the by, in case anyone is actually interested in the story I've been writing about Alpha I decided it's best to give it it's own thread in the Roleplaying Forum rather than keep posting big chunks of stuff the group as a whole may not care about... (And no, that's not a subtle attempt to get praise for it or any such nonsense, just practicality about the fact that not everyone will care about my story.)
Oh I care, it's very interesting. At the same time I hate you! In a good way mind you, as I'm envious of your talent. My writing is so far inferior to yours it's not even funny.
Thanks, but if you want to see some REALLY good writing on these boards find The Course of Superhero Romance by Dark_Respite if you haven't already. The whole story (so far, sequal I hear is in the works) is HERE without the bother of the miscellaneous comments in between posts. Her writing does ot me exacty what you say my feeble attempts do to you!
By the by, while I shall make reference to other Daybreakers characters in my story, possibly even steal a snippet of RP chat if I think to save it and it's appropriate from time to time, I am not going to use them as main characters in the story. Not that I don't think they toons all look great or I don't like this or that about them... but the contrary. I'm too afraid to write somebody elses character for the huge fear that I will get it totally wrong from how they intended. Best to use my own imaginings and in game content (which I feel much more free to warp however I desire...)
Oh, leave the strories here. They are very interesting. I usually write a backstory for any toon I want to keep, but nothing like you write It's great to know people have imaginations and writing skills BRAVO!
By the way, I mentioned the Negogiator badge mission I have ready to accept. Does anyone want in on that? Post if you are interested, then maybe we can run it Friday first thing. If, no one seems to want to do it, I'll just solo it before the team gets rolling, Sound ok?
Officer J. Justice
Not sure what all these badges are about but I'm all for getting them anyway....
As for the stories how about I compromise and mention when there's new segments posted? They probably won't keep coming this regularly though...
By the by, I'm definitely creating another Daybreaker toon to run outside the group. I think it's (rp wise) going to kind of be Alpha after the story I am writing for him. I just really like the uni's and concept and want to be able to run it more regularly
I loved your stories so far - kind of inspired me abit :-) - as for the negotiator badge I totally want in!
Unfortunately Daybreaker Omega (AKA Chris) has suffered from a cut in his funding for this project. He's planning on taking his case to his company's (Edge Corps') board tomorrow morning at 8 AM CST to try to get his project back on track. Since the scandal with their formal CFO Wednesday (you may have heard about it on the Paragon nightly news, he was charged and tried for insider trading), the company has suffered the loss of several contracts. In an effort to reverse Edge Corps' losses and financial downturn, they're cutting any and all projects they consider not vitally necessary to the company's survival. Chris is taking his statistics from his first field test of the new suit a few days ago as well as a well prepared case to the board in hopes of convincing them that Project Omega (so named because of Chris' clever attempt to let the PPD know that his suit will be the final word in modern law enforcement) is not only vital to Edge Corps' survival, but will be the contract that will help get back on their feet. Hopefully it will be a quick meeting and the board will come to their senses.
((OOC - something came up at work so I have to go to a meeting at 8am cst tomorrow (friday) which hopefully won't last long, but will make me late to the group, sorry in advance!))
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Thanks, but if you want to see some REALLY good writing on these boards find The Course of Superhero Romance by Dark_Respite if you haven't already. The whole story (so far, sequal I hear is in the works) is HERE without the bother of the miscellaneous comments in between posts. Her writing does ot me exacty what you say my feeble attempts do to you!
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The funny thing is, I started writing TCoSR on a lark because of a one-off joke I'd made while running with a friend. I had no idea it would a) turn into a 44-chapter novel that b) would turn out to be as horrendously popular as it did.
I love the story, sure, but I still wonder why folks go crazy over it. I guess people really do love Nerd Flirting.
Michelle
aka
Samuraiko/Dark_Respite
THE COURSE OF SUPERHERO ROMANCE CONTINUES!
Book I: A Tale of Nerd Flirting! ~*~ Book II: Courtship and Crime Fighting - Chap Nine live!
MA Arcs - 3430: Hell Hath No Fury / 3515: Positron Gets Some / 6600: Dyne of the Times / 351572: For All the Wrong Reasons
378944: Too Clever by Half / 459581: Kill or Cure / 551680: Clerical Errors (NEW!)
Fhorar, join in when you can... This is a change in plans so I by no means blame anyone who cannot join in or can't make the full time...
Dark_Respite, How'd you sneak in here?? (But you are welcome, of course!) There are a few reasons I think people enjoy your story so much:
1) It's truly a cut above (or three) of the general fan fiction or RP stories one finds in such forums. Your writing shows true talent, it is very polished and it's very coherent. I myself know I suffer from a tendency to ramble, stray off point and an inability to edit... I truly envy both your talent and your skill.
2) The content. Your use of a main character draws people in who may not normally read the rp forums. You give the reader everything they could want; romance, action, character development and just the right amount of humor.
3) The fact that you are generally so fast at providing more, I believe, also keeps the reader glued to the thread. If there is only new content once a week or less I think it easy to lose track of even a really well written, interesting story... Knowing there will be more tomorrow or the next day makes it much easier for reader to make your story "appointment TV" where they know if they look they will find entertainment...
I think the combination of all those is what truly keep your readers glued to your words. I also suspect you'd have even more dedicated followers with a different title... Don't get me wrong, I like the title and believe it very appropriate... But I suspect this game is largely younger male players who have a tendency to shy away from "chick flicks" or even "chick lit" and with Romance in the title I think a lot assume that your story falls into that category. It does indeed contain that but at the same time it also contains very well written action scenes which I think these people would love but may never see due to their inability to get past the title... (all in all, I would still vote to keep the title. Screw those afraid to move past their prejudices!)
Okay, I'm trying to get to you guys but the servers are down?
I'll stick around then as long as I can stay awake. I was really looking forward to seeing if the new system I set up allows me to run with better than minimum graphics.
I left early, planning to remake Zeta as a Sonic/Sonic Defender, which is still the plan. I can make it a SOnic/Thermal if people think we need more healing, but the sonic bubbles are amazing defense and the -Resist damage from Sonic will make us kill much faster.
I can't make it Thursday, something came up. I'll be back next Tuesday.
I can hit 7-8 easily enough. Or even 15 or whatever you guys get on Thursday. I tell you the AE may be obnoxious, but it serves its purpose.
Since I'll be making a Defender I'll take all three leadership powers, eventually. There's some soloing abilities I just won't need with this character since Zeta will only be played in groups. Anyone who wants to stack leadership with me is welcome. Having played a VEAT I can tell you stacking leadership bonuses makes them amazing.