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It's pretty good, but the tension in his face, doesn't match the lack of tension in his body... I would exaggerate the pose, or offset it to the left or right, to show more extension in the arm and ribcage. The piece is so symmetrical now, it seems as if he only lowered his arms and opened his mouth... hardly a convincing pose if you were going for drama, which I'm not sure if you were.
I agree with LJ. Its a really easy habit to fall into to perfectly center subjects, but helps a lot to keep stuff off-center and asymmetrical. The emotion in the face is looking good, though!
Ka-me-ah-me-ah?
j/k looks great.
New arts here. I'm really happy with how it turned out but I am glad I am done with it. Now I can give my attention back to the list of surprise gifts. Watch for updates.
Oh, and comments welcome.